| "Brother's Can't Be Trusted" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 02:27 CDT
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this is onw of the best stories i have read keep up the great work cant wait for the next Chapter
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Title: ah!
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao! JIRAIYA THERE TOO! THAT'S TOO GOOD AND FUNNY! THANKS FOR UPLOADING! ^^
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 15:18 CDT
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Ah, finally forgiven! Good!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 13:59 CDT
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Ah, that is so sad :( Stupid Sasuke.
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Reviewed By: Plastic Spoons [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cried for sasuke in this last chapter. things just aren't going to well with naruto for him. :[
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Title: vocabulary good ^^ ♥
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! please don't soften up on the vocabulary! i so like the fact that im learning japanese ^^ im sorry i drop so many reviews but i can't help it -_- gomen-ne. arigato gozaimasu for uploading looking forward to the next chapter! =] ~リリアン
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Title: More than glad to~+ ^_^
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omG! I AM DEFINETELY MORE THAN GLAD TO WRITE I REVIEW! I ♥ THE STORY AND IM VERY EXITED TO SEE WHO IS GOING TO BE JOINING SASUKE AND NARUTO, though i have a pretty goo feeling of who it is but if its not that person then im still going to be happy because however you put it, it comes out good!!! ~looking forward to more ^^
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Title: YAY!!!
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic and i always look forward to it ^^ ♥ IT'S VERY UNIQUE AND I LOVE IT!! ^^ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPLOADING!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good. Heh, lucky Sasuke, he weren't cought peeping.
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A long chapter, how nice. Heh, Sasuke trying castrating Itachi - a sight to see! lol. So, Sasuke just jumped in the bed, still wet? Hm, he really does't trust his brother.
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Title: wonderful!
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i trully love this story! and your style of writing is really good! you are really good at being descriptive and a good writer! i love you writing and i love to see more please ^^
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Reviewed By: Kary Asakura and Mimi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are fast on updates and have a good story as well as a good style of wrighting. I award you >.> now to go pay class dues....
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My God! Another already? That is so cool! Thanks! Naruto is incredibly naive... Itachi, you sick bastard! It's wrong to play with others feelings! Also, you might want to check what's wrong with the bold in this chapter. I doubt you typed < /b> intentionally.
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! Another chapter already! That's great! But that naughty Itachi! Really, he's an addict. So, Sasuke's crush is already beginning to form. Okay. I do wonder how Itachi will get child that innocent. Naruto seems to be one who would fall for him but wouldn't give his cherry because of it so soon. (HA! I actually said 'cherry'! lol)
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Reviewed By: Lyndsey On: June 04, 2007 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I can't wait for the next installation :D
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