| "Brother's Can't Be Trusted" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Coolkat123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished reading chapter 30 and it was so awesome. I mean, all of this so far has only been like a month in the story. It is amzing that you are going to keep Haku-a new rival and enemy-for half a year (though I kinda have a feeling that it will be dramtically shorter than that, especially since he's gonna realize that he is no match against Saskue for Naruto's heart). Speaking of Haku, talk about a jerk, especially all the stuff he does to Sasuke. I wonder how Jiraya will react when he realizes that Haku is gonna stay with Naruto especially since he obviously wants Sasuke to be Naruto's lover (Haku won't probably let him video tape anything-that ball kickin bastard). I'm pretty sure that Jiraya won't be happy and neither will Zabuza when he finds out who else Haku has a crush on. That's definitely gonna be an interesting visit over the Holidays. I'm really hoping Naruto realizes his true feelings for Saskue soon. After all, I loved the outcome of them watching a movie together. LOL. Anyway it looks like this story is gonna take a while to finish, it definitely has the potential of reaching a hundred chapters if only one month is 30. You are an amazing writer Kiwi with the most amazing talent known to man kind. I can't believe you wrote two chapters that long in just a few days. AMAZING!!! It would be awesome if you can do that more often, mainly because this story is SO AMAZINGLY HUMONGOUSLY FREAKIN AWESOME . Remeber to always update and like I said before make sure this story has an ending! Don't give up on it like a failed experiment and don't think about finishing anytime soon. Like I said this story can definitely make it to 100 chapters at the very least. I just hope Sasuke and Naruto end up in bed together soon, the wait is killing me. Like I said before never give up and become a writer when you grow up. Such an awesome story. Remeber at all costs give this story an ending but not anytime soon though!! I hope you keep updating frequently also. It is amazing how fast you can finish the chapters. Well see ya you freakin writing genius. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 03:58 CDT
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HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! Haku just droped his pants....err...uhhh...skirt, in the middle of a store, how awesome is that?! I laughed my ass off. hope chapter 30 is just as funny.
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Title: THE BEST STORY ON THE PLANET
Reviewed By: Coolkat123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, this is the best fan-fic I have ever read in my life!!! You are so amazing. The story has plot and meaning, it isnt some pointless porno. On a scale of 1-10 on your talent I would give you a 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000. There is just one thing though. GIVE THIS STORY AN ENDING! It would be most horrible thing in fan-fic history if you just stopped writing and we never know what happens to Saskue and Naruto. I cannot tell you anything that is more horrible then reading a truly awesome fan-fic and realizing the author just quited. Plus your story is just so amazing. I can't believe how good you are dude. I love it how you took all the Naruto characters and them in the real world. At first I thought it was really unusual, until I read the first chapter. I mean words cannot describe your writing ability. You are just so descriptive and AWESOME. Trust me, if you ever become a writer by proffesion you'll make millions in the first week. Remeber to care for the fans and make sure there is an ending though. But dont stop this story anytime soon!!! Like I said you are the best writer in history! Never let anyone tell you otherwise. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 01:46 CDT
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I swear, I don't think that there's a chapter I haven't liked yet. Ch. 27 was great, I love how you make everyone just show up at the worst moments, makes for a good laugh. Oh, and you definatly have a popular fic here, after I finish this comment, that'll be 44, but what do you expect, the whole thing is engenious. love you always *chuu*
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 04:14 CDT
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Chapter 25 was adorable, you cleared up troubles of the past with Sasuke and Itachi, and began the stitching of some what of a bond between them. I loved it *crys* And reguarding what you said about a falling action, NO!!!! I don't think you should ever end this series, keep writing forever, entertain my mind to no end, mwahahahahahahahaha!!!!! Love you *chuu* ^^
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Title: So good!
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol loved it! I think it was sexy that sasuke was humping naruto lol OMG and i so loved the lime!
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Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 00:58 CDT
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I'm not signed in lol BUT! omg! i so love that this story is not ending anytime soon! I SO WANT TO SEE ALOT MORE OF IT! =D SPECIALLY NOW THAT ITACHI IS PLAYING SAFE! YAY ITACHI! lol i wonder how is sasuke going to make that date special?? and HEY! I BET ITACHI WILL GO UP POINTS lol OFCOURSE it is itachi!!! =D thanks for the update! ^^
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 15:45 CDT
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Ch 22 is great, I went strait from hating Itachi, to feeling bad for him, if a writer can do that, then you know they have talent. The reasoning behind him obsessing with sex so much is truly profound, and it really does make a lot of sense. Great job as always, I vote that you should write a book.
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Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 18:01 CDT
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wow..... intense much....but he had to know sooner or later (sigh). but i loved the chapter!!! but there's one more thing sasuke doesnt know yet. jeesh! wonder how that'll be when he finally gets to know itachi.....! Thanks so much for the upload! =)
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Title: latest chapter
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! so that means that itachi is going to give up on naruto =/ THANKS 4 THE UPLOAD ♥ ^^
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Reviewed By: Wolf-Chan On: July 04, 2007 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear writer (sorry forgot to check who) I LOVE YOU!!! you are one of the best writers ever (i only like a few writers). i've only read a few yaoi and yuri but this is the best one i have read so far (i don't read off this site). i love the dare game, it was hilarious. please write more funny chapters!!! i also like ero-sennin, he is one of my favorite characters off the anime. YOU ARE THE BEST!!! i love the anime but you just made naruto one of my favorite characters! i love it when he is so clueless ( although sometimes i feel like punching some sense into him(if he was real i would) since he is sometime way too clueless). you are a really good writer so please continue. P L E A S E U P D A T E S O O N ! ! ! ! from JayJay ps. YOU'RE THE BEST!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 23:23 CDT
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I could not stop laughing when sasuke told naruto about his dream " I dreamt I got molested and that my brother stabbed me in the back!"
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 23:05 CDT
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I liked the bed scene poor sasuke... i think naruto might have freaked out if sasuke put the moves on his so soon...after all imagine waking up to a new friend and finding them trying to get some. not very good to start a relationship
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 04:49 CDT
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damn itachi is one sick puppy, if naruto is in the tenth grade and he is a sophmore in college...i like naruto and his egg..he so is the mother. In the beginning of the chapter i think you meant to use the word fawn not flaunt...i could be wrong but it would make more sense.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 04:30 CDT
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When i first read the summary i thought that sasuke and naruto would be friends to start off with. But i guess this makes more since if you are friends with someone and know their brother is a pure player-slut then you would not fall for them. it also puts them (itachi and sasuke) on the same footing...so when Naruto picks sasuke it's becasue he is the one he really likes more....i like it. sasuke does end up with naruto ultimatly..yeah?
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