| "Brother's Can't Be Trusted" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 01:11 CDT
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Ch. 20.......You're fucking amazing, I love you, and I love your writing. Most young writers don't tend to be as descriptive as you or have such a high vocabulary; I was truly surprized to find that you're only fifteen. Anyway, happy birthday, I'm glad that I get to say it to you. Tell you what, I'm an artist, and I love to draw yaoi, how about I draw you a cute picture of Naruto and Sasuke as a present, Just give me a couple of days and I'll get it done, I just need to work it around my scedual, but it'll be done. Happy birthday again, and keep up the great work.
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Title: 21
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 23:59 CDT
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oh! and i also look forward to the lovely time itachi and naruto will have together AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPLOADING =D
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Title: 21
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this story just gets better and better!! ^o^ and yes that would be so good! I just love how itachi is turning soft slowly I LOVED THIS CHAPTER AS WELL! and also just another thought randomly.... itachi hurting naruto= itachi hurting himself
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Reviewed By: Mistress_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 03:30 CDT
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YAY that was great. now i really cant wait for the rest by the way HAPPY BIRTHDAY
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Title: Happy birthday!!!
Reviewed By: Darling_425(not logged in) On: July 02, 2007 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, that was hot. Hm, I wonder if Sasuke will realize that Naruto really did it because he lied in the game(of course, he enjoyed for different reasons). Also: Happy birthday!
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Title: chapter 20
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! wonderful! WATAKUSHI WA SUKI DESU!! my japanese isn't so good......im still an amateur =b but i find this chapter to be a little funny just how sasuke goes a little out of his character. And HAPPY B LATED BIRTHDAY! ^o^ oMG and it would be so nice to see itachi force naruto to do a little lime, even though it would be harsh but it would so put naruto on the victim side instead, but dont listen to me lol that's just me thinking ramdom please update soon ^^ Lovin the Lime =D
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Reviewed By: Kags21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good, poor Naruto what is Itachi going to do, too him?
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Title: Kiki
Reviewed By: Kags21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this, update soon
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Title: 7&8 ♥
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i said it once and ill say it again!i love your writing! and specially that strip tease! but does that mean that kiba might be like naruto a little more now?? lol cant wait to see what happens!!! ^^ ♥
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 03:31 CDT
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.....Thanks for Kakashi's interruption, I really wouldn't have liked to read about that. Anyway, I still loved that chapter, especially Naruto's strip tease, that was awesome
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 01:35 CDT
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So your really gong to have someone back out? That's pretty maniacal of you.....then again, from all the things I've read from your fanfics, thats not all that bad I guess ^^
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Reviewed By: Kary Asakura (and mimi-chan On: June 28, 2007 01:20 CDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YOU BASTERD!! THAT NEXT CHAPTER BETTER BE UP BY TOMARROW AND ONLY NARUTO GIVING HIM HEAD!!!
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Reviewed By: DesertThorns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
>3 I like the plot of this story, it is very origonal :3, The creativity is very well done, thanks for the read ^^ well done :o.
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Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter! ^^ aplease keep writing more! =]
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewed By: babylov91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 20:23 CDT
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omg! im so worried about what may happen between them (naruto and sasuke). and what about itachi..... he's a meany but i just love him ♥ ^^ THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR UPLOADING!!!!! =]
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