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Title: cHAPTER 23
Reviewed By: Kansrield445646 On: December 02, 2007 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG I have to tell you one thing. DON'T APOLOGIZE! So you made Sasuke the bad guy, but it was AWESOME. Never apoligize for a great story. THANK YOU ^+^ Can waitt to read more
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Title: Chapter 19
Reviewed By: lo4385739023 On: December 01, 2007 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG when Shikamaru came back all pissed off and told Itachi to fuck Naruto with the sake bottle I fell out of my chair and started to roll on the floor convulsing. OMG that was crazy. Kakashi saved the day though. I love this story so far. Keep it up
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: lara_101_chick_93 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 07:52 CDT
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im pretty sure ive written befor to tell you how great ur doing, but ive never been so impressed. kisame is a sick bastard and has just gained my respect on so many new levels for what he did to fugaku, its not even right. so all 3 couples in one chapter?(what if it was a huge six man gang bang? i dont think sasuke would go for it though.) cant wait to read your last chapter, keep writing you got a super awesome gift to share with the world here.
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Reviewed By: braids davies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thankyou for writing this the made me cry so hard keep trying hard! braids
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 15:48 CDT
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I love this story!! lol, u did a great job and I liked the little ItaNaru at the end, that was groovy. I can't wait for your new story.... just an idea, but why not make the story SasuNaruGaara all together, ya know? I've never read any of those before and I'm sure it would be interesting. just a thought tho. Well, I'm sad it has ended but I suppose it had to, *sniffles* Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Thanks. That was a good story.
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Reviewed By: super_sleuth On: August 30, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can definitely write a ZabuzaxHaku, SasuNaru, and KisamexItachi all in one chapter.
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 14:23 CDT
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Good idea Kisame! Cut that off! Man, I love your story!
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Reviewed By: LOve_narusas On: August 28, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You story is really good kiwi. I do have a suggestion though. Add another Naru/Sasuke lemon at the end. This time make it a thank you when Naruto saves Sasuke from his father. This way Naruto will be the one on top and Naruto can finally claim Sasuke like Sasuke claimed Naruto. (you know what I mean--make Naruto fuck Sasuke). Anyway great story. I luuuuuuuuuv it.
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel awful. I've been keeping up with this story from the beginning but i have yet to review. sorry... I just felt like I had to tell you that and also that I love this fic!! Its amazing! you are very creative and i love the way you mix in humor with everything so that there is never a dull moment. I'm sad to know that it is nearing an end but I suppose it must eventually... *sniff* ah, well. I can't wait to read your other stories and I look forward to the closing of this one with much anticipation.
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 08:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMFG! That damn Fugaku! I hope to see the next chapter soon enough.
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Reviewed By: Nico-chan On: August 19, 2007 22:32 CDT
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i cant read this because it is so bunched together...if you could maybe fix it? I really want to read it, the summary makes it sound really good. sorry my vision doesnt let me read things so bunched toegether. email: wolfcrestshadow@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: I_lovekiwi On: August 18, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story please please please update soon. I really want to see Naruto in action!!!
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 04:16 CDT
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When I think about it, the plot of this story has greatly changed. But it's still really good and I'm very interested about what will happen to Itachi later. And his father. ALSO, THAT WOULD BE SO COOL - SEEING NARUTO IN ACTION. Sorry for the caps lock ^^"
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Reviewed By: Darling_425 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 00:15 CDT
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It's really sad that Sasuke is so oblivious. Heh, KisaIta ^^ I wonder what Naruto got else for his birthday.
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