| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:28 CDT
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Loved the latest chapter of course ^ ^ great job on it and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the new chapter ^^b lol it was great, but where IS shippo? :O waiting for the new chappy! ^^
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From exciting, entertaining, nail biting intensity to comic relief...you've had me hooked all the way
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 01:35 CDT
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Ack! I hope you're not getting to predictable on me I would be sad.*Exudes Extreme Sarcasm* I sit in contimplation of the next unexpected twist. A very meaty chapter, I approve. I too will be indulging in Potter debauchery this weekend.
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Title: Well written
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 18:38 CDT
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I love the latest chapter you did ^ ^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! You are improving all aspects of the story the plot is fleshing out nicely having started a just tad on the sappy side (not bad just slightly reminiscent of a dime store romance novel), the charictors are looking to have more substance then originally met the eye. Once again I am enthralled.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*pokes ElegantPaws with her pitchfork* >( aaah you evil person! leaving it like that! grrrr. lol, at least you update fairly quickly :) can't wait to see what happens next! ^^
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 12:07 CDT
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Dun Dun Dunnn. A good plot twist. Though For the last couple of chapters I felt that the plot left it has turned around. Yea! Though tht scroll does confuse me. Is Inuyasha her soul mate of Shesshomaru? And which aspect of the souls is the characters. I know that courage is Inuyasha but what of the other three?
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I enjoyed this chapter, it left me with an uneasy feeling...as if this parchment might cause more trouble for our Kagome...just when you think she is about to get her life going in a good direction...I'm uncertain
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 00:14 CDT
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Ah the plot thickens. I enjoyed very much. Not 100% on the newst twist with Kagome's father but, I will reserve judgement till you pan it out a bit more. As always, I impatiently await the next installment.
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ i am sooo exited i wanna read more!XD and i really wanna know if kagome is gonna get pregnet XD she would be an awsome mother!
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Title: excellent updates
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the new chapter its getting very interesting the relationship between kagome and sesshomaru is progressing but still miner fights lol i love inuyasha wanting her now that he knows he can't have her way to go kagome sticking up for herself girl power lol well i loved everything about the recent up you are a truely amazing writer your very creative with the whole fan fiction ill ecspecially loved the sex scenes"rutings" lol very romantic well your a damn writer im so honored to get to read this master piece of a story very beautifully and well written im astonished truely remarkable well thats all i can say for now so please oh please update soon. i hope you had fun on your 4th of july well get much needed rest to fuel your brain with more excellent ideas for your amazing fanfic looking forward to reading more so please update soon your biggest fan *hugs you* From Sheena Kinsella a.k.a Inuyashalover161 ill be rootin for you lol so please update soooon!!!! luv yaz
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very little to do with advancing the story (as you acknowlaged)but you can tell it's leading to a more adventuresome point in the plot. excellent transitional chapter. I await the next installment with baited breath. In fact you and a few other authors are begining to inspire me to make an attempt at writing again, which I haven't done in several years. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 16:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter, I love this entire story! Keep going, I love this story.
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your manner of writing continues to delight. The tale is fresh and has not gotten stale. (Of course creating this Sess in such a way that he causes this readers toes to curl may have a little something to do with my enjoyment.)
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