| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I have finally read this chapter. Whoa, baby. Erotica is your thing. Now what's in the sequel makes some sense. I haven't figured out what the deal is with Masaru except Sango seems drawn to him, or at least she is lusting after him. I did not think he would consider being with a human. However, his secret smile seemed to say otherwise. Why is Miroku pissed? He has seen Masaru communicate with Kilala, so he is feline possibly. Why seeing that exchange would trigger anger I am clueless. There must be a few more chapters, right? Jean
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 11:56 CDT
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I kinda' feel sorry this will end soon T_T I really like the story. Well, thank u for another wonderful chapter and waiting for more. I wonder how all will finish ^^
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 02:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story. I first thought it was going to be a light fluffy perverted comedy but it really isn't. Sure, some parts are rather funny and it is perverted, but I wouldn't necessarily call it a comedy--more drama or adventure perhaps. The story is good, but it tends to get confusing at times. Still, I look forward to the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: Maddie50 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My heart bleeds for Miroku. I gather that he is not meant to be with Sango after all. We all know he copes with being consumed by a curse by living life to its fullest when he is not pursuing Naraku to save himself and avenge his family. Life just plain sucks for him. Perhaps after this vision she would have been able to accept Miroku now that he understands. However, I think it is clear that he sees the comparison in behavior between himself and Sango's father will always be there in Sango's mind and he would rather let her go than risk hurting her. I love Miroku's character. He is so wise and has such burdens. I hope he lives to see happiness. Jean.
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I liked this chapter. It had all the elements of resolution and yet still had a bit of a cliffie to keep the reader interested. (I really want to hear what Miroku has to say to Sango!) Naraku isn't quite aware of the concept of pride coming before a fall, is he? LOL! As always, EP, you've delivered a delightful chapter. I patiently await the next one.
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Title: Yays!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 21:14 CST
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Woot woot!! LOVE the resent chapter you posted up. Sorry it has been sooo long since I posted up my review >< I am going to a Job Corps in IA so it is a bit hard to get on the internet some times, especially with these evil fire walls!!!!! TT TT I mean Gah! So many of them, it's like you can't do anything at all on the int. What a waste of interenet costings *sighs* But I am glad they haven't blocked this site yet. I don't know what I would do without it *hugs the computer* Looking forward to the upcoming story chapter and I hope it is soon ^ ~ Well gots ta go deal with chores on dorm, see yas and keep up that story you do so well.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 09:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!More!More! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^. Good to have TSNNM back, really missed it, althoug Meery Christmas Mr. Taishou as worth the waiting :D. Mmmmm....I realy like the change in Ayame, she is more mature and it suits her well, but I wanna know what happens next!!! Well, anyway, keep up the good work, thank you for another wonderful chapter and have a nice week!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was hard to put down for more than a little bit at a time. The twists and turns it has taken keep the reader quite interested in what is happening. The idea of Naraku being a bigger problem than he is; is a great idea. Also I was really surprised with the last bit when Kagome's grandfather showed up in the Sengoku Jidai. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Myst Runner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow just wow. I will say this much I stopped reading IY fan fiction because I just felt that everything had been done to death and nothing was original anymore. This story of yours has shown me that the IY community is not totally dead yet and their is still some hope. So keep going on this fic and don't let it die. Keep going I want to really see how this one is going to turn out.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh..I want to know what happens next :((:(( . Btw, loved the Ayame x Inuyasha coupling. I would have never thought of them, so naturally. Great job, another awesome chapter. Thank you so much for finding time to write.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 06:44 CDT
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omfg i loved it update soon XD it was sooooooo coool!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...where did Totosai go to? Guess I`ll have to wait for the next chapter to figure that out. Really nice chapter, quiet but very enjoyable. Ohh..I really love the new development regarding Kagome`s youkai condition and totally adore the Koko thing. Awesome job, thank you for this new chapter.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 22:37 CDT
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Jaken seems to remind me of Dobby to some sort...
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I`ve been waiting for this chapter. Thank you so much for finding time to write it, it`s been a while. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 22:54 CDT
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It would be quite fun to dance around a Jaken head...^_^
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