| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It didn't say whether this was a Sess/Kag fanfic. BUT, I think I found out.
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 19:51 CDT
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Sweet! Another chapter. Some of your grammar could use some work - sentence fragments that should be connected to the fragment previous. Silly little things like that. But overall - this story just rocks. It's compelling, I truly believe the storyline and the character development. It's just fascinating to read.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the plot is geting more and more complex. I really love the ways things are developing. I can`t wait to see what happens next. *Reverent bow* and thank you for finding time to write this.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Allow me to kill him miko, this Sesshoumaru will make it virtually painless," growled the Western Lord under his breath, as he rose, pro-offering his large palm to his Lady, who chuckled. "Nooooooooo… I'll deck him later… I promise." "Hn… acceptable." it should be one hundred points in Creativity and Enjoyment for that little piece above, but alas that can not be so.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:47 CDT
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Haha.. silk...
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 21:25 CDT
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*sigh* What were you thinking posting without giving me the preview? *wink* Alright so I enjoyed the surprise, and surprise it was! Wow! I knew you would pull the elements together but I did not expect this! I was expecting a more subdued prelude to the death of Naraku. I humbley await the fanale to come.
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:26 CDT
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I finally get to read the last two installments of this story! I've just been so busy I haven't' had the time to check my mail! Lovely chapter as always.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it! Shou was behind everything, still need some more info on how that happened but... wait a second...Darn! Now I have to wait another week to know what happens next, and I suck at being patient!!! You`re so mean!! But this chapter was really good and full of action (no lemons though *sigh* ).I`m pretty pleased Naraku got his ass kicked. Big time. Thank you for writing this wonderful fanfic *bows* and I`m waiting for the next chapter.
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Title: This Sesshoumaru Needs Not a Mate
Reviewed By: Nilee1 On: September 30, 2007 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass chapter!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 14:03 CDT
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Yeey, I`m so happy you` ve done another chapter. I`ve been waiting all week for this one. So what should I say. First of all, I love the Winnie the pooh quotes, and the other ones ofcourse, they blend perfectly with story. As for the story itself, I`m glad to see thing are moving. I wonder what is Naraku up to, but I guess I`ll find that out pretty soon. As always the incredibly well written Sesshoumaru/Kagome quarrels are a joy. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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a pretty calm chapter - except for the usual Sesshoumaru - Kagome quarrels, but those are the best, so I don`t think anyone minds them. I love them. Waiting for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 19:02 CDT
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It did have a calming flow about it...
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 18:35 CDT
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~!*^_^*!~
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although sadly short, it was an enjoyable chapter. It answered a few of the lingering questions...somewhat... I liked the "calmness" of it, although it was far from serene. I eagerly await the Storm.
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Reviewed By: Fluffy Shin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Awww...you sure are good. I just love the way you developted the initial plot into this wonderful and very, very intriguing story. Waiting for the next chapter and hopefully more lemons *wink*.
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