| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: August 17, 2008 13:31 PDT
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well bye-bye hidden leaf village!!!!>:D sad about the baby. but i have a felling she'll survive. it's a crying shame you don't have time for more writing. this story is near it's end but it can still go further. if by some chance you happen to want to make a sequel, could you just make the entire story and then post them weekly? UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 11:39 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....what the hell!! I didn't like that at all!! >:(
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Title: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animegrl750 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 18:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. I've been reading this one since the beginning and I love what you've done with it. But, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO HARM SUCH AN INNOCENT CHILD?!?!?!?!?! WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I still love the story though. ~Animegrl750 aka Kazumi-sama~
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 10:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took you long enough, but its good. You left a cliff hanger so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ljsdfhgv On: August 12, 2008 15:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides a few gender issues this story is still brillant. Please continue!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another nice chappie done. Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 17:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I don't use a pitch fork I use a dragon summon and a barrage of kunai with exploding tags. Secondly, I'm glad you continued. Third and finally, I loved the scene good chapter can't wait for the next, and as always UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: June 17, 2008 13:59 PDT
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well i'm geussing the author has left cos his page isn't open anymore. oh well this was a great fic a shame to see it go down like this.
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Reviewed By: update On: June 11, 2008 16:02 PDT
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update upddate update please
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Reviewed By: Blue2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With each new Chapter i love this Fanfiction more. I hope that the next Chapter will come soon.
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Reviewed By: Zombie_killer On: May 22, 2008 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really should update more or you story will be forgotten. you should realize the longer to wait to update the more people will forget about the story. hell your last update took so long i had to read 4 chapters back just to get the gest of what going on. that is a inconvenience to your readers. so please update more frequently like every 2 weeks as opposed to every 2 MONTHS. you have a great story going on here and although you don't have much reviews it's your duty as an author to finish this story if only for your loyal readers.
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that is why they're killing the leaf ninja. The leaf village is the enemy of Naruto's family. I don't think they have any reason to hold back, and it demonstrates their power. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: someone somewhere On: May 07, 2008 12:34 PDT
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man i love this story!anyone besides me notice how the kitsune are kind of becomeing what they hate? i mean they ARE killing off the leaf genin knowing full well they had nothing to do with naruto's treatment just like the like how naruto never asked the have the kyubbi the leaf genin never asked to be born in the leaf village. man i can't wait to see what's next please don't wait so long to update.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 19:32 PDT
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awwww!!! That's so cute!!! Please keep going the story is really good!!! ^_^
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