| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: demon_sitter On: October 20, 2007 18:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, though I was canfused about what was going on in the begainning. Please hurry and update.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this and I read Like mother,like Son. Both are great.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 21:48 PDT
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awww that's so sad!!!!! Poor kyuubi. IT started out awesome but it got sad!! This is really good story please keep going!! ^_^
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Title: The Son's Legacy
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 11, 2007 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please contune with th story. it is getting good.
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Reviewed By: Greatfic On: August 11, 2007 08:32 PDT
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finally!!! jeez that wait was just ridiculous. and listen you gat people who hate gay fics (me) reading this how it'sgreat what more motivation you need? i think i speak for everyone when i say i hope you update soon. REAL soon.
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Title: More please
Reviewed By: Bloodrainanitta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 12:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and I hope that you update soon because I would love to read more of you creation.
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: August 04, 2007 19:21 PDT
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come on it's been forever update already!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow ^^
Reviewed By: Animegrl750 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story as well as "Like Mother Like Son." I'm a big fan of fanfics, but a lot don't ever seem to hold my attention for long. These two, however, are among the best I've read. I even have them saved on my Favorites so I can chack them for updates. I can't wait to see what happens next. Again, wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: July 04, 2007 22:56 PDT
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you know i can't put into words how much i hate fanfics with gay moments in them. this is the first time i can say that i ENJOYED the frist story AND this one. give yourself a good pat on the back you got some good stuff going here. only thing that has me confuse is how naruto can be wanted in a country he made:P
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 22:42 PDT
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Way to go naruto,sasuke,and midnight for having childern!!!!I can't wait to what happens next!! Here's a big cookie for all your hard work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Naye On: July 03, 2007 13:49 PDT
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More soon!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: firekitten On: June 26, 2007 10:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i'm happy. i was worried that u would not be able to put this up. it's a nice concept though i got cunfused for a second. hey why did kanoha attack gaia? oh and i want to see rins reaction to midnight and sasuke. oh and i love the fact that they call there hokage with -kun instead of -sama. omg i just realized everyone calls sasuke, sauske -chan LOL. please keep it up i luv it lots. oh and i noticed your grammar is getting better do u have a beta now if not i would be happy to do it, if you like. don't judge by my crappy grammar in reviews, i dont believe in grammar in reviews or msn; and i took honor english in high school and in my first year of college. any way more please.
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Reviewed By: Naye On: June 23, 2007 06:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more of this soon. Was the woman with the four purple tails Hinata? And if so, who is her mate (please be Naruto too hehe).
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 15:49 PDT
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YAY!!!!!! I love the way you made rin say cute when he saw the kids! I know I would becasuse I bet they were cute with their tails. And naruo is under his mother's two tails is so so ... man i have no words to explain how happy i am. I really can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blazen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 13:53 PDT
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:P I love you! I truly love you! Chapter one is amazing! Keep it coming. Update soon. Cha!
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