| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: veranath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 18:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story please keep writing. i cant handle cliffys. the suspense is goin to kill me.
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Title: Why!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki On: November 03, 2007 19:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO not a cliffy i don't hate u but no not a cliffy what will happen who died Naruto: Was is midnight Midnight:was it me Kenshin: was it me Me: was it me of course not i'm not in this story Sasuke: your not making this any easier and who ask u and do u keep poping up writing these stupid comments Me; because i'm bored sasuke why are u so mean (shows watery anime eyes) *Crying* Naruto: don't cry please don't cry Me;(cries even louder) Yin,yang,keshin: what happened lady Me; *sniff* sakuke *sniff* was being *sniff* *sniff* Mean waaaaaaaa Sasuke; what me mean i'm pregnant and its harmones fualt look i'm sorry chii-yuki Me;(immidiatly stops crying)yay thanks sasuke i forgive u and ur harmones Sasuke: TWins: So thats ur name chii-yuki-chan kawaii Me:see ya next time on talking with naruto's clan Naruto: whe this this become a freaking show and who watching Me: oh millions All except me: what your dead mostly by sasuke Sasuke: yeah u made me apoligize and uchihas don't apoligize for anyone not even pregnacy or harmones Ur dead Me: see u guys next *Runs for life yet again*
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Reviewed By: great fic On: October 29, 2007 03:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
sweet chapter. though i'm curious about how the rookie 9 will react to naruto. don't know if you have anything planned but i'm hopin'..........as long as you don't bash on hinata
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Title: Awesome Fic !!!!
Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 13:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
wow I thought naruto was about to bite someone head off for a moment there. And iruka was happy to see naruto which is so awwwwww!!! I love this chapter!!! Please write some more soon!!!!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: chii-yuki On: October 27, 2007 23:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This stoy is rated ten plez update soon ok Me:Wow naruto sakura is really MAd Naruto: yeah! did you see that tear drop she was a bitch after all Sasuke: you got that right she hurt my naru-chan keshin: bitch Yin:bitch Yang :bitch Sasuke naruto: children don't say those words Me:yeah children that not a good word Keshin,yin,yang: Ack it's the naked lady we saw last time talking about yaoi. what is it! Naruto sasuke :yaoi! Me;laughs nervously yeah fuuny thing about that uh lets see give me a cahnce to think (thinks of naked yaoi guys) *nosebleeds Naruto:what hell are u thinking of Yin: daddy what's yaoi Sasuke and naruto: Nothing children (Poofs away angry at me) Keshin,yang;??? Yin:why won't they tell us what yaoi is i Me: let it go Kids together: You started this get her (runs after me with sticks *growls* Me: see ya got to go (Runs away to hide)
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Animegrl750 (aka Kazumi-sama) [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. I have been a fan since "Like Mother Like Son." This is one of the best Naruto stories I have read. I hope you continue on and I can't wait for the rest of the story. Oh, and please check out my Yu Yu Hakusho story "Warming Up." I love feedback and it would help to know if I need more work or not before I put up any more stories. Thanks, love the stories. ~Kazumi-sama~
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Title: found it
Reviewed By: chii-yuki On: October 26, 2007 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this story is just purrfect i love it alto its to good Me: what great story you guys are brave Yin:*growl* human why are you talking about us Me: i'm not a human see (trnasfrom into fox)i,m a fox to with 6 tails Yang: Wow your pretty um your naked *nosebleed* Me:ops sorry (Snaps finger and clothes appear) Yin:daddy will like you and mommy Me i like your daddy to he's hot i love his yaoi realtion Keshin: what do you want any way Me:nothing just making convo Yin yang keshin: what's yaoi! Me:oh nothing children (Poofs away smiling evily)
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: October 24, 2007 16:39 PDT
Comment/Review:
YES FINALLY!!!! i tell ya it gets harder and harder to wait fot the updates. yet another grat chapter keep em coming! on another note if you want more reviews post this story on other sites fanfiction.net is a VERY good site full of people who check constantly on stories (and they review alot to)
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 07:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the your other story and this one and I like them both, Continue with the updates.
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Title: Awesome job!!!!!!!!!!!11
Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 18:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
don't be sad your fans are rooting for you like me for awesome fanfics skillz!!!^-^ Hahaha right off the bat they think shikamaru is lazy!!!
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Reviewed By: demon_sitter On: October 20, 2007 18:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, though I was canfused about what was going on in the begainning. Please hurry and update.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this and I read Like mother,like Son. Both are great.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 21:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
awww that's so sad!!!!! Poor kyuubi. IT started out awesome but it got sad!! This is really good story please keep going!! ^_^
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Title: The Son's Legacy
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: August 11, 2007 10:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please contune with th story. it is getting good.
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Reviewed By: Greatfic On: August 11, 2007 08:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
finally!!! jeez that wait was just ridiculous. and listen you gat people who hate gay fics (me) reading this how it'sgreat what more motivation you need? i think i speak for everyone when i say i hope you update soon. REAL soon.
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