| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: MasterTdragon On: December 26, 2007 12:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides when you switched from Yang to Kenshi in the last chapter it was once again utterly brilliant. Please update soon as this story is getting better and better.
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Title: yeahyeahyeah
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 22:20 PST
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Me- write more yeah yeah yeah yang-Stop bothering her lady with your stupid comments Yin- yeah chii ilove ur name by the way me- thanks where ur older brother anyway yin- he looking for a mate yeah! me-what abu t me yang- what about you! Me- thats cold well i have to go and watch some YAOI! yin&yang- you still never told us what that is Me- i would have told ur bro if he was here since he old enough but he's not here and i got to go yin&yang- Wait me- see ya ~poofs away in smoke~ Update soon kay ja ne
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Reviewed By: Erika On: December 24, 2007 22:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it :D, the exams are turning out to be quite interesting, lol. Hmmm, I really feel bad for those who fight our dear three foxes, they'll die a horrible death indeed, something tells me though, that Kenshi is going to have more fun, and that he will get to know his future mates a little bit more :D [[grin]]
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Title: Keep It Up!!!!
Reviewed By: MasterTdragon On: December 21, 2007 16:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I have ever read so please continue. Please get the two chapters you mentioned in your last chapter up soon. I hope you have a happy holidy. As the title says keep it up you are my favorite author of all time!
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Title: Absolutly Sensational
Reviewed By: MasterTdragon On: December 21, 2007 11:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have simply out done yourself once again. I love your stories this one is absolutely brilliant. I hope you continue because I absolutely love this story! Thank you so much for the sequel! I LOVE IT!
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Title: fianlly
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally the next chap up i, into i don't feel like having a conversation with the boys but i'll be back update soon update soon
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Reviewed By: great fic On: December 16, 2007 08:08 PST
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yeah you could make it int the movie (or better yet the anime world)you must have one hell of a mind. maybe after this fic you can try to make a novel in your free time. hell it might be as good as harry potter (never read it)
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: December 11, 2007 15:46 PST
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how about an update for the holidays?^_^
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Reviewed By: great fic On: December 04, 2007 16:49 PST
Comment/Review:
looks like we may have to beg again;)
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Reviewed By: Kumiko67 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 16:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I love your story!!! I also loved the presequel of this!!!! Your ideas are beautiful :D You might want to consider getting a Beta person. Despide the spelling and grammar odds I fully enjoy reading your story, my favourite part was when Hinata spoke, everyone should follow their example. The demons WOULD have been overkilled if they were human no doubt of it. They should be greatfull really, that they were only defending and no attacking. Foolish humans. :D :D :D :D :D I'll painfully but patiently wait for another chapter :D OMG I luv Naruto he is sooooooooo cooool and u made him 500% even more.
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Title: yayyyy
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2007 04:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: great fic On: November 11, 2007 19:56 PST
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SWEET and you made hinata keep to hher kind understanding nature (LOL just from those few lines she was given she seem more qualified to be hokage than tunadae)
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Title: Is this all of it?
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 19:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this all of it or no if not then update soon then if its is then that was really awesome the best i really liked it i knew hinata was the leader i had a feeling before u even said her name. Chii- *Crying* naruto it hurts so much see ur people getting hurt like that i won't forgive them for that) NARUTO- yes i know chii is ok don't cry sasuke-yeah now that my mood swings are over i'll be ok) keshin-chii plez don't cry i'm angry to look i raged but we have to be strong) yin/yang-yeah chii we forgive u for not telling us waht yaoi is will u tell us now) CHii-*stops crying* sorry got to go now) All-CHII!
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Reviewed By: Naye On: November 10, 2007 16:51 PST
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Hinata was amazing at the end. Please write more of her in this story.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: THE_WRITER_OF_CROW [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 16:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a good story overall. extreme creativity. 10/10
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