| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides a few gender issues this story is still brillant. Please continue!
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 13:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another nice chappie done. Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 17:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I don't use a pitch fork I use a dragon summon and a barrage of kunai with exploding tags. Secondly, I'm glad you continued. Third and finally, I loved the scene good chapter can't wait for the next, and as always UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: June 17, 2008 13:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
well i'm geussing the author has left cos his page isn't open anymore. oh well this was a great fic a shame to see it go down like this.
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Reviewed By: update On: June 11, 2008 16:02 PDT
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update upddate update please
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Reviewed By: Blue2501 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With each new Chapter i love this Fanfiction more. I hope that the next Chapter will come soon.
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Reviewed By: Zombie_killer On: May 22, 2008 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really should update more or you story will be forgotten. you should realize the longer to wait to update the more people will forget about the story. hell your last update took so long i had to read 4 chapters back just to get the gest of what going on. that is a inconvenience to your readers. so please update more frequently like every 2 weeks as opposed to every 2 MONTHS. you have a great story going on here and although you don't have much reviews it's your duty as an author to finish this story if only for your loyal readers.
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2008 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that is why they're killing the leaf ninja. The leaf village is the enemy of Naruto's family. I don't think they have any reason to hold back, and it demonstrates their power. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: someone somewhere On: May 07, 2008 12:34 PDT
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man i love this story!anyone besides me notice how the kitsune are kind of becomeing what they hate? i mean they ARE killing off the leaf genin knowing full well they had nothing to do with naruto's treatment just like the like how naruto never asked the have the kyubbi the leaf genin never asked to be born in the leaf village. man i can't wait to see what's next please don't wait so long to update.
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama93 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 19:32 PDT
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awwww!!! That's so cute!!! Please keep going the story is really good!!! ^_^
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Title: Yes
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome cant wait for the next chap this one took forever but anyway it can't be helped.
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 20:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness. Its brilliant, you better update soon. You left it at such a cliff hanger you've got to continue.
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Title: SWEET MERCY!! FINALLY!!^_^
Reviewed By: greatfic On: May 04, 2008 18:38 PDT
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great chapter. hope you update SOON. i was starting to get withdrawal symtoms:( i sugest to post your story on other sites to get more reveiws.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 23:52 PDT
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Damn that was a long wait. Oh well, WORTH IT! Okay, continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: come on On: May 01, 2008 18:43 PDT
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i hope you didn't abanon this fic. and i most certainly hope you ain't waiting for more reveiws cos it don't look like you'll get them. please update, you don't need reveiws you can clearly see over 5000 people looked at your story.
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