| "The Son's Legacy" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Riath22 On: February 27, 2016 05:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think your ideas are great and i really enjoy what I'm reading so
far. I do have to say though it would of been the 4th great ninja
war because minato was in the 3rd war.
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2009 15:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have done a brilliant job. Thank you for a fantastic story. I can't wait to read your future works.
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Title: cont. story
Reviewed By: sasunarufan On: August 25, 2008 13:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
make another story to prequel this one like how the world turned out
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Reviewed By: Gretfic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a great story. please continue to do more. but as i suggested make several chapters before you post the first and then update weekly. it's how most who update on time work. there is something i don't understand why can't you make strait fics?O_o its kind of weird i don't think I've EVER heard that before and i've been reading fics for the past 5 years. i suggest you read other fics so you can get the idea. the ending of this story is a bit weak in that we don't know what happened like 10 years down the road. perhaps you should add a small 500-1000 word summary or something on what happened to everyone, nala, the humans, everything. Again this is a great story i hope to see more.
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Title: YAy!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was awesome from beginning to end i loved it. i hope to read more from you.
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Title: My Favorite Story Ever!
Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have followed you from the beginning, and since the very beginning this story has been my favorite Naruto story of all time! I love your stories. I like yaoi as personally there is enough Hinata/Naruto and other hetero fics for me to choke myself with. You are a fresh voice and a wonderful author. Please continue The Good Willed Tyrant as that is my second favorite story of yours. Even though I do love all of your stories that is one of my favorites besides this one and "Mother Like Son". Please continue writing! Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 12:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
have you ever thought of doing a crossover
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Title: WHOA!
Reviewed By: chii-yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell what is wrong with those people ,they cant be killing a baby like that that's just sick. i want to punch those bastards. Update soon kay
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Reviewed By: someone somewhere On: August 21, 2008 14:29 PDT
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why do i have a feeling that it's hinata that did it:( i sure hope not. i'm a huge hinata fan.
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Reviewed By: Able_02 On: August 21, 2008 11:37 PDT
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wow that was horrible i can't believe this who killed the baby?
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Reviewed By: greatfic On: August 17, 2008 13:31 PDT
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well bye-bye hidden leaf village!!!!>:D sad about the baby. but i have a felling she'll survive. it's a crying shame you don't have time for more writing. this story is near it's end but it can still go further. if by some chance you happen to want to make a sequel, could you just make the entire story and then post them weekly? UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2008 11:39 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.....what the hell!! I didn't like that at all!! >:(
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Title: NOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Animegrl750 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 18:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. I've been reading this one since the beginning and I love what you've done with it. But, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO HARM SUCH AN INNOCENT CHILD?!?!?!?!?! WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I still love the story though. ~Animegrl750 aka Kazumi-sama~
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 10:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took you long enough, but its good. You left a cliff hanger so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ljsdfhgv On: August 12, 2008 15:08 PDT
Comment/Review:
update
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