| "Forever In Love" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 01:27 CDT
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interesting story with a twist though... i like it... hope this has a happy ending... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: No way
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting good.....and I realy don't think she has the stumic flew...(hint hint...to my thoughts at least).......Now this is going to get interesting we got all these people out to seperate our heros......Dang can't yka gust throw them in a room and catch them on fire dang it....but I guest there would be no story....sigh......Ok so basicly get the next chapter up as fast as you can so I can read more this is getting way go good.....XD (YaY!)
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Reviewed By: anonymous obsession On: June 22, 2007 21:45 CDT
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SHE`S PREGNANNNT ! YAY. ahahaha !
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 17:00 CDT
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Aww, this was soo sweet! =] Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Resilience [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 00:55 CDT
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hm. i don't know. i really do like this story (i mean Forever in Love and Past Mind, Present body), but i think this chapter might've been a small let down for me. i also tink that PMPS (lol, that sounds like 'pimps') could've gone further. i wouldn't of minded the trip to Hawaii being played out. But its cool. i hope this story is longer than the last one (chapters wise). i look forward to the next chapter! And this was good chapter. actaully. forget what i said. pay no attention to the rambling of an old lady.
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Reviewed By: fishesrcool69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 13:18 CDT
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Ohh! I can't wait to read this! grrr, upload a chapter!!!!!!!!! I really liked the other story and...yeah :]
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