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| "Fall of the Mighty" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: Chapter 36
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plyric *screams in frustration!!!* I so love this fic, but when did it move away from G/V to focus on their brats and grandbrats? Yes, I adore Spice, but reading about her training some ningens in a dojo is not that interesting to me. Frankly, I skimmed the rest of the chapter until I found anything to do with either Vegeta or Goku. I love your fic, but will it ever return back to G/V? I mean, whether they have a happily ever after or not, do you plan on returning back to just them?
| Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 31, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not tell you how much I love this story!!! It is, without a doubt, the BEST story I have read in...well...who knows how long! The details and descriptions you have are amazing -- you make the characters and backgrounds so real, they practically jump off the page! I have also enjoyed the way you refere to Goku as "the tall one", etc., and all the other "nicknames" you have come up with for the others, too. This is a very unique Goku/Vegeta story...I think it was very original to have Goku be the one to "start" the relationship. And creating the extended families of both, not to mention working them into your fic -- pure genius! As for Vegeta's character, you have done an OUTSTANDING job of keeping him the same old Vegeta we love to hate, while, at the same time, adding a depth to his character/background that is unlike anything I have ever stumbled across! (Can you tell I love this story, or what???) One more thing...just a hunch here, but are you planning to persue a Tong/Piccolo relationship at all? If you are, here's a piece of advice: DON'T -- you WILL regret it! (And no, that's not a threat...it's a promise.) Okay, all *ahem* joking aside, I really do not think that that would add anything to your story at all. I mean, think about it: you already have a great, multi-facited story with really interesting characters, so why take a chance of ruining it? I mean, yeah, Tong may need some comforting in a little while (...maybe), but trust me here -- Piccolo is a MUCH too complicated character to try and understand. I know it's an interesting challenge (believe me, I'm in love with the guy!), but you've already worked wonders with Vegeta...don't risk it, okay? In conclusion...(and congrats, this is officially THE longest review I have ever written -- or plan to write)...I hope I didn't insult you 'cause I really do love your story, stick with it, and WRITE FAST!!! I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! :)
| Reviewed By: Kieran On: March 15, 2004 09:47 CST
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I've read this fic about 5 times by now and I still love it! Thank Kami you finally updated...I was starting to wonder whether you'd given up on the story or not. Is it just me or is Taigar a bit of a suspicious character? *chuckles* can't wait to see what you have planned for him.
| Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I just found this. Had I found this this last year you would have lost me between updates. Although I am still highly disturbed by the pairing, The fact that I read all 35 chapters should tell you how good it is and that you need to update. I liked Spice at first but her self pittying witchy streak is beginning to wear thin. Why do you encourage us to read between the lines if your not going to follow what's written there? Vegetas musing about space at the End of Chapter 13, Unknown strong guy showing up , Someone being shocked over Spice's tail, Pan suddenly having problems with *children* at her dojo, Vegeta's constant bad dreams *cough*sixth sense*cough* about death and destruction.... Oh well to late now. I was obviously reading too much into it.
| Reviewed By: Mistress Asia On: March 06, 2004 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. I LOVE THIS STORY!! if i could give it a higher rating i would give you 100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 times that by like the highest # in the whole... well there's nothing high enough to rate this. IT IS THE BEST OF THE BEST!!! thats just a fact. i have read millions and millons of stories of all kinds and yours surpassed them all. (sory to all other writers, but its true)PLEASE PLEASE keep writting. ~~ Mistress Asia (aka... Lady Asia)~~
| Reviewed By: judgeman On: December 17, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it suck it'shorrible!!! syke!!!!! this story was thight and off the chain i like it and i would not of read it if i had seen that yaoi at the end but i liked it.(oh and incase u dont undersant what tight and off the chain mean, it means really good and intresting.) my e-mail is showstopper573@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Mor1814 On: August 22, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just re-read this fic and I'd forgotten how wonderful it is! I love the interaction between Vegeta and his family and I really love the way you have Goku and Vegeta's relationship developing. I can't wait to see where you go from here. I also can't wait to see where you go with the relationships between Spice and her family members. Keep up the great work! I can't wait for the updates. :-D | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: July 17, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been patiently looking for updates to this story and will continue to do so until you can update. You can count on at least one loyal supporter. Besides, gotta give you credit for having good taste in music. Got me into this music too! lol | Reviewed By: Bitter Battler On: June 03, 2003 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAGH!!!! I just ran across the fic, it was going so well, then ends in a heavy cliffhanger. Your style of writing is intense, both comedicially (have no idea if it is a real word or not, would have to dig through boxes to find my dictionary) and angsty.
Had to stop myself from laughing out loud at the funny parts. Not a good thing to do when reading after midnight. Please continue if possible. | Reviewed By: goku mum On: July 19, 2003 14:27 CDT
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*smiles* well, well, nice to see you back to this fic! But I also like the others you are cooperating with Dark Serapha. | Reviewed By: atshi On: March 01, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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heya! i really, really LOVED that fic until to the chapter vegeta and kakarotto lost their child! i mean i REALLLLLY LOVED it!! and still love' it! and i liked spice as well! but somewhen i got lost in all ur newly created characters - i mean its kinda difficult to deal with all of them as a reader who has never heard of them before! plus it gets boring if the reader cant visualize them like the main characters. with spice it was okay - u introduced her very well but all the others were just too much for me and i lost interest. hmm...... its like u started that great V/K fic and somehow ended mixing it up with too many other storylines. ...yeah... i think u got it by now. *sweatdrops*. it was wierd to read so much about a dream spice was having or the problems her brother dealt with and nearly "nothing" about kaky having lost his baby also. i expected more... but this shall not end in a "bad" review! i loved the first 5 hours reading!! u hear me?! I LOVED'EM!! | Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!! THis is sooo good! ONe of the best i have read!! Awww how can Vege be so cruel to kaky!? Anyway this is great!! Please update soon!!!!! I cant wait!!!!!! | Reviewed By: vegeta On: February 06, 2003 19:18 CST
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i havent read the entir thing yet so... be so far this is really cool! and i sound like an idoit. oh well. i like anima, horror, and sharp objcts. hee hee. i really sounding like kaorot. and i spelled that wrong. 0.o whatever good story so far | Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 12:36 CST
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oo oo this is nice! i likes! | Reviewed By: RoamingLake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 00:37 CST
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i have been reading your story everynight this week. i just cant seem to stop. : ) it started really good and kept on being good.
i cant wait till i can find the time to read the rest of the fic! | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
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