| "Love of her Master" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Daughteroftonks [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! Please update soon!! I really like it! Skweek out
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 02:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Goodness!!! i love this story its great... cant wait to read what happens next
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Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: July 23, 2007 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh I love all your stories, you have a really creative mind! I would love for you to update to :P please ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I LOVED IT!! it was really great! you are a really good writer! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!! YOU ROCK!!!
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I couldn't stop reading! I was sad that I couldn't read more. You are very talented. Please update soon.
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story i hope that you keep writing and i promise that i will read!DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i love it so far ^^ and i dont know what the others are on about.... i dont see anything wrong :P but ofc i di need a beta for myself XD but all well.. anyways please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this storyline so far. You do have a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout, but they're not that bad, just a little bit distracting. Anyway, I'm definitely getting into this story and can't wait for the next chap. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty unique~ I like the plot so far and I hope you update sooon!!! Good job.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a bit different. I was wondering how the slave thing was going to come off and I like it. Thought too, Naraku would put up more of a fight for something he wanted. And should be interesting on what happens when they get back to the castle. I like the plot/premise of your story, but may I suggest getting a beta for it? Either way, I do like the story and cant wait to see what happens, but update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I usually hate stories involving slavery (for more than one reason), but I decided to give this one a chance because of your other stories. I'm glad I did. Inuyasha is adorable here already, and Kagome seems just as sweet. They are going to be a wonderful couple when it all comes together. But, considering the circumstances, it's going to be while before that happens. So, I look forward to the build up.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 15:03 EDT
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Very nice. I like it. A twist on the IY as slave fics. Can't wait to see where you take this.
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Reviewed By: CassRae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 12:48 EDT
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i really enjoy it so far, have a beta or a friend go thru and get your small typos to clean it up a bit :) Fantastic story line! youve kept inuyasha in character in an AU, something many ppl cant manage. well done!
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: July 14, 2007 12:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really enjoy reading that. I love how realistic it is, with Kagome not quite willing to let go of her fear and mistrust and Inuyasha, though with good intention, still behave rather awkwardly around her. Really looking forward to character development of especially these two. I also love the consistency of common people's treatment of slaves, as Kagome would probably be treated like dirt because of what she is anywhere (as compared to so many fics where random kind and understanding people seem too abound). Anyway, more please!
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 12:02 EDT
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Quite a lovely story you got going. And as with your other stories, I love your portrayal of Inuyasha. Can't wait for more :)
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