| "Love of her Master" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome! Bastard Naraku! Yeah Inuyasha! I'm caught up already! Sango and Miroku being married is a neat little twist but he's still such a letch! :) I know this time of year is super busy so update whenever you can!
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 15:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon it is good so far
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Reviewed By: Daughteroftonks [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 19:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! Please update soon!! I really like it! Skweek out
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Reviewed By: lil_one [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 02:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Goodness!!! i love this story its great... cant wait to read what happens next
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Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: July 23, 2007 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh I love all your stories, you have a really creative mind! I would love for you to update to :P please ^_^ ~Sadie~
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I LOVED IT!! it was really great! you are a really good writer! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP!! YOU ROCK!!!
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. I couldn't stop reading! I was sad that I couldn't read more. You are very talented. Please update soon.
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Title: GREAT JOB
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story i hope that you keep writing and i promise that i will read!DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 01:51 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i love it so far ^^ and i dont know what the others are on about.... i dont see anything wrong :P but ofc i di need a beta for myself XD but all well.. anyways please update soon ^^
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Reviewed By: KilalaMoonRose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this storyline so far. You do have a few spelling and grammar mistakes throughout, but they're not that bad, just a little bit distracting. Anyway, I'm definitely getting into this story and can't wait for the next chap. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Ja mata ne!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty unique~ I like the plot so far and I hope you update sooon!!! Good job.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a bit different. I was wondering how the slave thing was going to come off and I like it. Thought too, Naraku would put up more of a fight for something he wanted. And should be interesting on what happens when they get back to the castle. I like the plot/premise of your story, but may I suggest getting a beta for it? Either way, I do like the story and cant wait to see what happens, but update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I usually hate stories involving slavery (for more than one reason), but I decided to give this one a chance because of your other stories. I'm glad I did. Inuyasha is adorable here already, and Kagome seems just as sweet. They are going to be a wonderful couple when it all comes together. But, considering the circumstances, it's going to be while before that happens. So, I look forward to the build up.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 15:03 EDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. I like it. A twist on the IY as slave fics. Can't wait to see where you take this.
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Reviewed By: CassRae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 12:48 EDT
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i really enjoy it so far, have a beta or a friend go thru and get your small typos to clean it up a bit :) Fantastic story line! youve kept inuyasha in character in an AU, something many ppl cant manage. well done!
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