| "Love of her Master" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 21:44 EDT
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Ok, ok, a little bit of a filler. Not much happening, but other than being in need of some slight revisions it was pretty good. I can't wait to see how InuYasha interacts with Kagome for this one. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 21:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy didnt told his father? wow... i dont have any clue why Sesshy wouldnt told his father... Koga is going to be in hell after in the jail... having Inuyasha fumming around the castle for a while wont be a good sight lol
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Kouga would be dog meat after Inuyasha found out about what he did. I am surprised that Sesshomaru left a message for Inuyasha about it and didn't mention it to his father. I hope Inuyasha calms down some after he finds Kagome mostly unhurt. Kouga is going to have to work hard to redeem himself especially after Inuyasha and his father find out about the earlier attempts that Kagome hadn't mentioned before. I can't wait to hear more about why Sesshomaru didn't say anything to his father about his rescue of Kagome and how Inuyasha deals with Kagome after this.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaxkagomeforever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 20:09 EDT
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yay!! woot kouga should b killed 4 tryin 2 hurt kagome!! i wonder wat inuyashas gonna do 2 comfort kagome after this *smirk* XD ha! well plz update soon!!
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 19:04 EDT
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YEAH! *PUNCHES SOMETHING OUR OF HAPPINESS* Kouga got his just desserts! Huhuhuhuhu! Anyway, thanks for the explanation at the end regarding Kagome's scent. I was curious about that too. Also, I'd like to note though this is another slave story, you have your own spin to it, plus you haven't abandoned it so like so many others. Other then that, I'm curious to know what will happen when Inuyasha goes after Kagome. I especially love his anger toward Kouga and how he wanted to tear him limb from limb. Also, Daddy Inutaisho plays the paternal role REALLY well! Go get em daddy!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 17:15 EDT
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this is great please update soon i can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 12:35 EDT
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OMG!!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!! I love your story!!! PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 07:55 EDT
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yeah, i guess when one is a sexual opportunist one doesn't consider that anyone else is any different. i stand corrected although i can't help butting in with my hypotheses and conjectures for a story i become emotionally invested in. it's a compliment really. . . i love your portrayal of sesshoumaru's apathy and indifference, kouga's trepidation. one would guess sessoumaru's motive for not reporting kouga at the time of the crime is that he figured that waiting until his brother came back and telling him first would provide some entertainment and the short wait would not have altered the inevitable outcome much at all. ~ *tips hat*, ginny
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Inuyasha's "reaction" to Koga was everything I hoped it would be, lol. I really can't stand people who prey on those weaker than themselves, just becasue they can. So, I sincerely hope that Koga gets even more of what he deserves (Inuyasha's butt whoopin' was a great start). As for Inutaisho and Sesshoumaru's "conversation", I'd love to be a fly on the wall, lol. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love how bluntly you put Kouga's thinking in your comments(reply) at the end!!!)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 02:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 03:55 EDT
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i think that you depicted that well. sesshoumaru isn't ooc at least in my opinion and gave very valid reasons for his involvement. smelling the wolf in his brother's chambers and hearing the girl scream would have given him provocation to investigate. even if he feels yasha is below him he still shares blood, meaning everyone else is lower still. the order to kagome to go to kaede's is logical as he will no longer have to be involved. one feels he should have noticed the reiki that she blasted kouga with. thinking that they tolerate a miko like kaede then her training should be suggested so she didn't accidentally purify anyone. at least she could defend herself from unwanted attacks and could become an asset in yash's missions. . . one would think that yasha would wonder what station in life kagome was from before she was taken by the slavers as only those of noble birth or of religious training would be educated, and even fewer women (at least in sengoku japan). . . 'interchange theory' every contact leaves a trace... one with a canine nose would definately know if a woman ever was sexually active or not. idiot would have smelled yasha's seed on her if she was being used as a 'pleasure slave' even if she washed... thing about sperm, they each have enzymes in their heads to penetrate the egg's shell and that is why there is a distinctive smell to sex. so a woman who becomes sexually active will have a subtle permanent change her their scent. kagome was sold as a virgin and her scent would prove that. ~ delighted as always, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you had Sesshomaru save the day. I nuyasha is going to hate that he owes his brother for protecting Kagome, but he is going to be mad at Kagome for not letting him know sooner that she was having problems with Kouga. This was a good way to bring the conflict to a head without Kagome getting raped. I look forward to seeing how Inuyasha handles the info.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy!!! woo i love Sesshy cold... thats him ^__^ and i cant wait when Inuyasha knows this.. its going to hell for Koga XD cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 19:47 EDT
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this is great i really like it please update soon
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