| "Love of her Master" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think putting it in the first chapter was the right call. It makes more sense now. Thanks. Will you be adding a new chapter soon? I really love your story and want to read more. Keep up the wonderful work.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 00:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am kewl. I actually like the change, it does fit better.
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Title: Thanks!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 19:03 EST
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Its my birthday today and I managed to get round to reading this chapter and it made my day!!! 1 question though this is an InuXKag fic isn't it?? Any way thanks again and I eagerly await fo more chapters!! ;) -*Draca*
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 09:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey when are you gonna make another chapter im dying to know what happens next ; )
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update please
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Reviewed By: midknightrein On: October 24, 2007 05:17 EDT
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loved cant wait till the next chapter
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow wow wow wow!! i cant believe i couldnt get to my emails >.< anyways LOVING IT!
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Reviewed By: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 00:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good Chapter :) Keep Up The Good Work. Update SOON!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And the stuff with Kikyo....oh, what a WITCH! What she did to him was awful. But, at least her presence served one good purpose: it forced Kagome to see Inuyasha as a man, instead of the just the hero-worship she was engaging in before. Kagome was already devoted to Inuyasha.....but it was more of a servant/master type thing. This stuff about Kikyo shook her up, though, and forced her to see that Inuyasha, although handsome and poweful, was just a man. I really liked this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 18:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! Thanx for updating!! I love this story and i can't wait too see what happens next! Great Job!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... about kagome being a slave... can't inuyasha just free her if he wanted to... then ask her to stay in the castle without being a slave... is kagome a miko here?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 16:54 EDT
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a little mutual attraction... then denial *smirk* . . . is it a society where it's allowed to steal 'free' individuals from their homes and enslave them? can the fact that she is free born have a factor in her being released or even her chances of becoming an eligible mate/wife for someone... a nobleman perhaps? . . . the guards attempt to quietly escort kikyo out of the premises only to have to drag her kicking and screaming "you'll be sorry! you haven't seen the last of me! i'll get you for this!" at the top of her lungs. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 14:43 EDT
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Great chapter, glad to see K fitting in, getting more comfortable with IY. Crap! More of that 'protect her from myself' mess. Darn that hanyou, will he never learn? Of course he will, but we have to be patient and let you get him there, that's half the fun!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... too bad kagome can't just be herself more often... the only time she can is when she's with inuyasha... when will the love & attraction come into play... hope inuyasha finds out about what kouga does to kagome... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 23:46 EDT
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i guess the more comfortable she gets the more she will get more fiery. i still think she should let loose on kouga the next time he tries anything and ZAP his a$$. ~ good one, you write 'attitude' very well >=) ~ a pleasure, ginny
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