| "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 282 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 23:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter to go with a wonderful story. Too bad Kagome lost her memory. Are you planning on her finding out what happened or is that part now over and done with. Is this ever going to turn into an actual love story between these two, or has that never been your intent? Either way, is fine because the story is good no matter how it turns out. Has it been nominated for any awards yet? If not, then it should be.
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Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X On: August 12, 2008 05:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I'm so glad to see that sess gave her her years back but you always make it seem like something he would do. You mold the story to him rather than him to the story and that is what sets this story apart. I'm glad this is more than a mushy love story, not that i don't love those too, but this is just so diff from the norm. Any who, i have a question for you... Will sess ever tell her what happened? If i were her i'd really wanna knw why i was missing at least a good chunk of time. I get that he doesn't need any self gratification out of his gift to her so he wouldn't need to tell her for himself but what about her not knowing about all that time? Even if she really didn't "lose" it dosn't she have the right to know? Well anyways, i trust in your skill to make the best of it so keep up the great work and if you don't see a review from me for a while it's cause i'm moving. Read ya later... ^_~
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Title: Question for Shiro-sama!
Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 08:48 PDT
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Question for Shiro-sama: Did the box steal anything else from Sesshoumaru? And did it do anything other than give 35 years back to Kagome?
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 08:44 PDT
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I laughed at this part, even though this general part of the story was sort of sad: "He couldn't be dead. Someone like him wasn't allowed to be. He'd frighten the death gods away just for the mere indignity of it." It's totally true. XD Can't wait for the next chapter. I honestly thought that maybe he would've become a human or something like that, but then I read the thing about the youki. *phew* ^^ Update soon, and, as always, I love it!
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Reviewed By: Ishellmay [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a question. Shiro-sama, what other than years did the box steal from Sessoumaru-sama? Also are you single? Lol!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2008 08:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will ever tell her what he did for her. It would be cool to get another visit from the naked boys. I'm excited that a new fairy tale is about to begin. I can't figure out what it will be, but it seems like it might be very intresting. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: taixishi On: August 10, 2008 01:56 PDT
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not that I actually expected Sesshomaru to tell Kagome what happened; it's still deeply disturbing that she's now left entirely in the dark (especially since knowledge of how well she adapted on her own to the necessities of her environment would probably be a big boon to her own self esteem going forward). So, while I'm doubtful that the two naked men would provide a straightforward yes/no answer to this Q, I'll pose it anyhow (reiterating what a prior reviewer asked just before me): Will Kagome ever find out any of what happened during the 35 years she "lost" when Sesshomaru opened the box? (My supposition is this could either happen via some external event/stimulus triggering recovery of those memories spontaneously, or else Sesshomaru might discovere some reason to need to inform her of her "lost" memories in order for the two of them to overcome some hardship in one of the remaining challenges).
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Title: poor kagome
Reviewed By: Nicnivan On: August 09, 2008 23:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
will kagome ever find out what happened in the 5th story? i guess since the 35 years has been removed, that kagome does not have the same body or power that she had gained. what a shame >_
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Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana On: August 09, 2008 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonderful chapter!!!! i'm glad the naked men are returning. will they reapear in the story? is Sesshomaru going to see kagome naked again? is going to be the other way around? will kagome get feelings for our lord of ice? and will all the charaters be relasesd after the end of this pass of time? or in easier words, is this the last time any one can pass threw the scrolls? and Sesshomaru has two arms, now i'm confused.
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Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana On: August 07, 2008 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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he finally sees her naked. and she doesn't even care. :D ya! finally, Sesshomaru is finally back, poor kagome no memory, i'm happy he came back before she died. that would have been bad. so will there be another talk show with shiro sama and orochi?
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 18:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kags-HOLD IT!!!! what if i turn back to my old age and see sessh in that state?!!! ~tba- points to curtin* he'd hiding behind there cause he's afraid ur gonna attack him again. oh, and that he's in his underwear. ~kags-.. i... but i just jumped on him and pulled his hair. ~tba- *shrug* oh well. u know sessh and inu. very sensitive about their hair. i mean really. he tried to throw u off. ~sessh-I CAN HEAR U!!!! ~tba-U WERE MENT TO!!!! ~kags- sigh* just say watcha need to tba. ~tba- ooh! i think i have A.D.D! ~sessh- u sure do. ~tba- im not really sure. that or im just crazy. ~sessh- cant it b both? ~kags-0 no pun intended. ~inu- DAMN IT! GET ME IN THE DAMN STORY!!! ~sessh- u know inuyasha. if i werent hidding behind this curtian to to my state of dress (tba- rolls eyes* yea. thats y.) i would be killing u right now. its her story. but seriously. could i just put on my clothes before the next story? ~tba- BYE!!!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very touching that Sess would give Kagome 35 years of his life. Did she earn it? Yes. Is it a crack in Sess's iron facade of indifference. Yes. What I'm curious is if Kagome retains the skills she learned on the island when she returns to the 18-20ish whatever year old she was. Unlikely, sure, but it would be kind of cool. I enjoyed this. Sure, it's a clifee, but it's a fun one.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 07:35 PDT
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Sess is officially my hero now!!!! So now the question is, will Kagome regain her youth while still standing naked in front of Sess and will she slap him while yelling hentai; if she regains her memories as well!!!! Can't wait for the next installment
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 05:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, he fianlly gets it. I feel so bad for Kagome. She's so much stronger now, but she's missed so much of her life. She never had a choice, and now he could give her one.
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Title: 36-37
Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana On: July 29, 2008 23:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor kagome. thats really sad. i'm still crying for her. i'm glad you made Sesshomaeu nice to her. and lets her call him by his brother. i'm still crying becasue poor Kagome was left for so many years, alone. i don't think i could live that long, with out some one to talk to. those were the best chapter i've ever read, even thou they are sad there're really good. and i hope your next chapters are just as good.
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