| "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 282 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Pavarti On: May 23, 2009 14:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Update Soon I Love That She Rescued Her Self!! Please Say Its Not Over Yet!!!! T_T I Really Love Your Work Please Continue!!!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2009 00:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter (again)! It was interesting to read the battle scene. I've never figured out how a firerat would look or be like, but now I have a mental image of it. Nice. :D And Sesshoumaru in his true form is just great. Heh, no wonder he doesn't like to get wet. Who wants to smell like a wet dog? XD Now don't take too long with the next chapter, okay? ;) I can't stand the wait!
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 14:45 PDT
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ok, I meant to say thanks for MAKING kagome a real human. Not the other way around.lol! damn these fingers! :)
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2009 14:43 PDT
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Oh dear, sesshy proves that the only good rat is a drowned one I see. lol. Love the update, thanks again for not making Kagome a real human! I love her new found responsbility, its really sobering and personally more endearing then the jump-in-front-of-a-bullet-because-its-the-right thing-to-do-kind-of-girl she has been portrayed as. Imagine an emotionally giving Kagome, that now thinks! We love it lol! Thanks for moving away from the cliche and deepening her character. Anyhow, I am rambling...until your next update I drive myself mad with waiting...
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: Ice Vixen X (NSI) On: May 11, 2009 15:08 PDT
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I reeeeeaally think you should write a real book and get it published.... you would make a lot of money. lol... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (not signed in) On: May 11, 2009 15:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always... the lessons you teach are awesome and i can't wait to see it all pulled together in the end, though i'll be sad when the story is done. I loved how you panned out to the outside of the cave when sess decided how to deal with the the rat... lolo. I could so see that as how they would make the anime happen. good job and keep up the great work. By the way i was thinking of printing out your story when all was said and done and turning it ino a book for my son when hes a little older... i wanted to make sure you were ok with that. I wouldn't use it for profit or anything, but as i said i love the lessons. Let me know... ^_~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 20:32 PDT
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Oh crap...I was wondering when he would arrive. Sesshoumaru will not like coming back to him there, without a doubt. And Kagome, poor thing always did have a temper, right? :D Anywho, great chapter and thank you for the update.
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Reviewed By: Seito [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2009 20:32 PDT
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Wow. I love your story and how original it is. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (not signed in) On: April 28, 2009 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one had a very touching ending... and i was wondering why travilers were aloud in. Update soon please... ^_~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 23:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful chapter! I really liked the ending. But it's also interesting to hear their side of the story. Now I can't wait to see what happens to Sesshoumaru and what will happen when he has found the fur of the fire rat. :D Can't wait for more! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 10:33 PDT
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Thanks for the update! I never thought I would be able to feel sympathy for teh earth gods, but somehow you were able to make me feel just that. Sometimes I get the feeling that even though the scroll is definitely a curse to some, it was a neccesary tacic in the developement of the trapped characters. I mean could I really love the earth gods or Orochi if they were left alone, wihtout any punishment for their weakness or evilness? Well, maybe if you were writing it lol. Great job in bringing that out. Until your next update I drive myself mad with waiting...
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 18:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of those trapped in the scroll keep saying that one day they'll all be free; that they can feel the magic that holds them failing. I can't help but wonder if it's a foreshadowing on your part. That was a lovely chapter. Thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: April 14, 2009 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW I didn't see that comming till right before she said it! I like this twist to the prisoners. Her love of the daughter makes sense. Update soon please. This is one of my fav stories... ^_~
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Reviewed By: huntressbella [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for updates! I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I'm going to be sad when it is over.
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Reviewed By: Inu Trasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2009 16:56 PDT
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Thanks for the update! So this is where the earth gods are hmmmm...yikes! do we get to meet everybody's captor in the end? someone needs to kick his ass...just my opinion...hope Kagome doesn't have to wait long! Wonderful writing as usual and until you write again, I drive myself mad with waiting....
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