| "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 282 ] |
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: July 29, 2008 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Every time man, you love to kill us don't you. You are just so talented it blows my mind. I could see sess doing the whole chase to see what she went through just to sate his own wondering. And what a twist at the end. I'm sure his conflicted face had something to do with oh.. i don't know. Calling himself inuyasha! Now i know he holds something strong for her even if it's care in the form of sympathy, but for him to call himself Inuyasha for her is just mind blowing... hehe. Keep up te great work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 20:03 PDT
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O.o ...Well this can't be good. I like how impressed he was by her survival skills--it was nice to see him pleased with her at all--but I can't wait to find out the reasoning behind pretending to be Inuyasha. There has to be some incoming fallout from THIS one!
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 20:02 PDT
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This has gotten so much more descriptive as you've gone along. I love how you described how confusing the whole situation was for both Sesshoumaru and Kagome. I seriously almost cried at the end of this last chapter. Keep it up! Please, update soon, and, as always, I love it!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tba-... wow. ~kags-.... i dont get it. if im about 16. and 35 years past. that would be... ~sessh- 51. ~kags- AH!!!!!! my adult hood was hunting animals???!!! i'll make u pay!!!!!!! ~sessh- wait a sec. isnt tba suppossed to hurt me like usual? ~tba- crosses arms over chest* im fine with it. as long as u give me 20 bucks. ~kags-... *takes out wallet* i only have 9 ~tba- grabs cash* close enough. ~sessh- how is 9 close to 20? ~tba- *takes whistle* on ur marks, get ready! and GOO!!!! ~kags- tackles sessh* ~tba-. wow. he couldnt even dodge. *shakes head* poor fella. *shrug* oh well. i made nine bucks! *smile* update soon! Bye! ~sessh- GET HER OFF ME!!!!!!! ~TBA~ (lol. this might happen if he says he's sessh before he opens the box that will return kags memories. ps.. advoid any sharp objects.)
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 08:02 PDT
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NOOOOOOOOOOO how on earth could she want to mistake Sess for Inu??? Why would he play along, other than the fact that he had a purifying arrow drawn towards his chest...can't wait for the update!!!! Keep up the good work. BTW will Kagome's clothes reappear once she regains her youth if Sess so deems her worthy of her youth again....she might be more useful for him now as an older and stronger woman.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2008 04:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, crap. Well, I wonder what he'll do next. Surely he won't leave her like that. It's just not right. I hope you're one of those authors who loves happy endings. That's what I'm praying for, anyway. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: taixi On: July 27, 2008 23:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gaa, this chapter actually caused tears to well up in my eyes! You painted a picture of a broken woman quite well. And Sesshomaru softening up (a bit) by allowing her to think he was Inuyasha was quite believable -- it's not like he suddenly became so out of character that he's feeling immediately empathetic to her, but he sees how broken she is and gives in just enough of a minute amount to acknowledge yes, I'm Inuyasha, in ordere to give her that little bit of *necessary* comfort. I'm really enjoying your story so far; keep up the great job.
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Title: aw -.-
Reviewed By: ice vixen x On: July 24, 2008 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I'm glad you put in her time and the sad picture it dreated. Just having sess come back to an old kags would not be nearly as touching. I wonder if after her years are given back that she'll remember all that she went through... hmmm. Keep up the good work and update soon please. You're killing me with the waiting to see sess's reaction and the choice... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 17:04 PDT
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That was really amazing. The way you went from the first day, when she remembered everything, to having almost forgotten who she was even waiting for--it painted a very painful picture of what so many years alone could be like. Imagine not even being able to naturally be injured or killed--to have no option of any change at all! Wow. My question now is, even if Sesshoumaru does give her back the time, did all that time actually pass in the real world? and if so, would him giving the years back to HER make them rewind for the rest of the world as well? and also if so, will she forget the time she's spent? So many questions that I hope are answered soon! Oh, and by the way...give 'em what for! I think you're doing fine at the pace you're going, and if nothing ever happens between them, I'll still be glad I read your story. Thanks for writing and for dreaming all this up in the first place! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 16:50 PDT
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Oh my gosh..........Kagome...not talking??? the world really has come to an end.......hehe...but seirouly she can't remember him...I guess spending 30 some waut years alone will do that to ya....poor girl....I wander if she will get her memories back after Sessy gives back her youth...that would be koo...and to have all the life expirience she gained...I hope you update really really soon.......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Deakasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 16:02 PDT
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OMG This was really heart-wrenching to realize that Kagome went through all those years without company and forgetting everything that came before. Good chapter. Can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 10:35 PDT
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O_O Now what?! I love it, like always. I didn't expect you to go into the details of how Kagome survived when she was left alone. I like it. Please, update soon!
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 02:24 PDT
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Great update!! So is Kagome still walking around naked or is that only to swim??? What did she do with Sesshoumaru's clothing and armor, hopefully it hasn't disintergrated over the years or rusted. Can't wait to see if she gets all cuddly with the demon that she might not remember or even if he will be the one to open the box to give her back her youth, please update soon.
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Title: Here's six words for you....
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 12:56 PDT
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WOW!!!!!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... well. atleast she was buzy. ~sessh- aslong as she doesnt ask me any questions im fine. ~tba- right. like she's not gonna ask u who u are. what ur doing there. why you have silver hair and what not. ~sessh- baka onna! shut up! *starts chasing tba aroun* ~tba- ha! i knew u couldnt resist me! ~sessh- wrong chasing. ~tba- oooh. uh.. update soon! bye!!! *dodges when sessh lunges at her* ~sessh- come back here!!!! ~TBA~
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