| "Seven Feudal Fairy Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 282 ] |
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 13:29 PDT
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I must say, this story gets better and better as I read along. I hope you update soon. Your use of sensory details has greatly improved. Keep up the great work, and update soon! =]
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (NSI) On: March 26, 2008 12:26 PDT
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Aw that was kinda cute with the sentimentalness. I loved the castle. the fish paintings especialy... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 02:10 PDT
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sniff* sniff* ...that ....that is so...so sad.....*cry*....I never thought that after reading the dragons true past that I would feel sorry for him but I do I feel sorry for him, all thoughs in the stories befor him, and all those who have yet to come......I Know that is trully is pointless to feel so sorry for them but like Kagome said.....'When does it stop'........Oh hello any ways new reader hear.....hehe.....I love this story you had to do some crazy research for this fanfic I respect that, I remember right be for I started reading this on I found one that was really poorly done the characters wheren't in character, the plot left much to be desired and the worst thing of all was that they where actrully useing short hand text message style of writing.....I was like freeking out after like the fifth out of twenty some what chapter I could read any more I fell like it was have a negative impact on my vocabulary .....that was just scary......hehehe any ways I'm starting to drift a bit like I was say I so totaly respect you in writing this story it so cool how the characters remain in characther, the chapters are a desent size, you defenetly reread you work, and Its really entertaining....XD......................I have a question I get that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are getting more comfortable with each other will the remain the same once they get out of the scroll?.....Does time stand still for those who are not in the scroll?.....Will they be able to save those trapped in the scroll?..............When does Kagome get the bow she is going to use to kill the cenntapead in this story?....So many questions yet no answers yet I hope you continue to updated I'll be looking forward to in.........................................Nyuka....X3
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter as usual. Did I miss it in the last chapter, or does the Dragon King know who Sesshoumaru is? This reason I'm asking is because nothing was mentioned about his grandfather. I know why Kagome didn't ask about him, but why wouldn't the Dragon King explain what he had done when he explained all the others? Anywho, I hope we get an update soon. I love this story so much and I'm interested to see how you will bring Sesshoumaru and Kagome together. I can see that they are starting to get used to each other, but is that enough? I wonder if you will throw something at them that will make them look at each other in a different light?
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Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 13:59 PDT
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Oh, my. I think I absolutely love the Dragon King's character. You portray him so convincingly it's just amazing. I think I always use the word 'amazing' whenever I comment on your fanfic. lulz I'll try to use some more creative words from now on. Great story, though. I love it still. I hope you update soon!
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Title: chapther 24
Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana On: March 12, 2008 17:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that story wqas kinda scary, but man was that good reading! i thank you very much for the up-date!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 03:47 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chapter! I wonder what will happen with Kagome and the Dragon King. Seeing as she's a maiden and all. Perhaps Sesshoumaru could help her with that little 'problem'. ;) But no, they are not far enough in their relationship yet... Update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2008 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know about this dragon king guy. I have a funny feeling he'll try to do something nasty to Kagome. But, I guess I'll find out soon enough. Thanks for the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (nsi) On: March 06, 2008 12:39 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yet anouther great chapter. You know i actually started researching japanese myths after starting this story. I must thank you for the idea. I 've found the base for a couple anime in old tales. very cool... ^_~
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 00:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable story and quite funny in parts. Hope you update soon!
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Title: chapter 23 &24
Reviewed By: Taisho, Hana On: February 29, 2008 21:07 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter's 23 and 24 were really good! and i like how you messed a little bit in this story! i can't wait for the next chapter! but why did you up-date in the same day? Love the story your write! and will watch for the next up-date soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Nami no Chi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 19:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the better fictions I've read lately. Thankyou for putting forth your effort for my amusement.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 16:49 PST
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well I'm sorry to see sess's father go, but I have to admit the dragon lord is interesting. Your story so makes me want to find a copy of japanese fables.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2008 15:04 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so there are others captured in the stories. This is going to get very intresting.
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Reviewed By: west On: February 25, 2008 13:05 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you update regularly. That seems to be lacking of late in most of the better writers out there. I was hoping they would start questioning the different characters to see why they were trapped and who they were. Good work. ^_^
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