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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 23:47 EST
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i havent heard from you in a while... i dont even remember what this story is about anymore... but ill remember, ill read it, if you update... so please update... i dont like to, but i do give up hope eventually...
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2009 19:00 EST
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so... life gets in the way and all... but id really like it if you could update... im not rushing you or anything... just saying...
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: January 16, 2009 10:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another really good chapter but I still really want to kill kurama. He had the nerve to get angry that Hiei's soul was in danger but be indifferent to poor kagome's situation. Even though Hiei is the only character I kind of like right now since he feels actual guilt, I kind of want him to get hurt so Kurama and the others suffer. Koenma is also angering but I'm shocked with Yusuke. Instead of worrying that they hurt kagome, he's worried that now he won't be able to trade her in for his girlfriend. Normally, I like keiko but again I can't help but want something bad to happen to her so the group suffers. God, their so horrible. Sorry about that but I'm very passionate about this story. Great job!
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Reviewed By: Kurisuti Kamae On: January 16, 2009 10:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is going really well. I absolutely am in love with your story. However, I'm unbelievably angry at KUrama and normally, I love him. Still, I want him to pay for being so heartless and cruel to propose that idea and than not even feel guilty about it. Even Yusuke and Kuwabara don't feel as guilt-stricken as they should but Kurama's aura is maddening. I'm not saying you didn't make him in character; in fact, he is very much in character and You're doing a great job not mixing up characterizations like so many do. I'm just really angry at him! Will he/they have to pay for what they've done to her? Anyways, great job!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Jennyxoox [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading this story keep the chapters coming great work:)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 04:34 EST
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oh my, hiei is in kagome's body this will be interesting. i wonder if miko powers will stay with kagome's soul or her body, will hiei be able to use them and the dragon? thank you for the update it was a great birthday present.
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Reviewed By: Little Red [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 01:55 EST
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I love the story so far, and have officially added it to my favorites... I love the originality and I adore how you've twisted Kagome's personality. I just wish you would make the chapters a little longer, not only for my selfish reasons of just simply wanting more to read, but for the general appeal. When I think about starting a new fanfic I take into account how long the chapters are on average, and I must say, yours are below what I usually accept....
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Reviewed By: darknessmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 00:28 EST
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nice! hiei in kagome's body... wow...koenma is gonna die!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great! I must say we have missed you- welcome back!
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Title: Ch 20
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 04:30 EST
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So...Is Kagome dead...bring her back! I look forward to your next chapter! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: uniquewithoutu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 23:15 EST
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WOW...this story has sucked me in. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: machille18 On: November 17, 2008 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is that really the end? or was that just a cliff hanger? just asking because at the top it says completed and I dont see how that could be an ending, it reads as if you intended to continue..... and i really hope it's the latter because I really enjoyed reading this
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2008 15:06 EST
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Great chap. But i have a question, what is he going to tell Kagome's mom? well untill next time
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 03:41 EST
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It's very late and I'm very tired, so I'm just going to ask a couple of quick questions and try to remember to get back and leave a proper review soon. Why did they take her soul out of her body? I thought they were going to wipe her mind--what does her soul have to do with that? That really threw me. So did the statement that a soul had never been returned after being forcefully removed. Not so! Kagome's soul was forcefully removed from her body when Kikyou was resurrected. And it was successfully returned, except for the piece Kikyou was able to hold on to. I'm also not sure why they would have hooked Kagome up to a saline solution or anything else. If her body was still functioning, basically like a person in a vegetative state, they wouldn't have needed to do anything like that for a while, if at all. She could be fed. And why bother when they were getting ready to turn her over to Naraku to torture? He sure wouldn't be hooking her up to anything. And she wouldn't need to be "turned" after a few hours. Of course, if they removed her soul, instead of just "suckng her brain," her body should be "dead," like Yusuke's was, and she wouldn't have her eyes open looking around. "She" may not be able to die without her soul being complete, but her body without any of her soul could. I have to confess I think it would serve Yusuke and the others right for her to be dead and Naraku to refuse to accept her in trade for Keiko now. Of course, if Koenma just killed the spider, then Naraku already knows they wiped her brain. So, he isn't going to make that trade anyway. They blew it. They spilled their plan in front of the spy. And Naraku already had some kind of hold over Hiei and the Jagan and he still does. They have no leverage now. Keiko is a dead girl. I imagine Naraku would kill her in a fit of rage over them taking away his opportunity to get the jewel from Kagome. So, they gained nothing and blackened their own souls in the process. I really loved your cliffy, btw. The others are searching for Hiei and he is caught in Naraku's web. (Of course, I realize you could pull a REALLY sweet move on us and have it that Hiei never really came to and he IS the one whose brain got "sucked" and he's living these nightmares. Heh heh! Well, except for the parts where he wasn't involved--I suppose the scene with the others realizing the spider was the spy and then went to look for him put the kibosh on that possibility. Shucks.) Anyway, it's an awesome cliffhanger. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 22:13 EST
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You are evil... so very evil and cruel. But I suppose that it works out, but please... PLEASE! update soon.
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