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Reviewed By: Yanagi4387 On: March 11, 2008 12:57 EDT
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Why did you have to leave it right there! Dx i want more! you must update more and faster! the chapters are so short! T_T you should make them just a little longer i dont even care if you put two chapters in one so it takes twice as long to update lol but other than that i really like your story and where your going with it! Im doing this at school so i have to go the bell is about to ring ill finish this comment when i get back! >.>;;
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 17:37 EST
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oohh....so wait, confused. did they ever catch the spider? or did they catch it and it just stayed on the desk? otherwise, good. to change the color, do this < font color = "insert color of your choice" > type what u want to say, then to stop do this < /font > only, w/o the spaces. ;D FL
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:54 EST
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oh hell just trash the spider and give kags her powers back im tired of her being weak this is your story and not a flame i hate having to tell people that......
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 03:07 EST
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well I did miss reading a bunch of chapter cause of my stuped computer and e-mail but it dosn't seem that the story has progressed to much so it doesn't really matter I guess..........though they are very nice filler chapter I do say, I still can't believe Kagome Lost her powers it just doesn't seem fare .....life just isn't fare.....She will get them back though...right?....she just has to what kind of prestess doesn't have holy powers....and where the heck could they have gone....ya can't just lose power like that one day it just doesn't make sence thing just don't dissapear...does that mean some one took them.....or maybe they were taken in exchange for her life since she tried to kill her self....I don't know and I wont untill you tell me.....*pout*...ME...WANT...UPDATE..............*CRY*..............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 22:46 EST
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Niiice! I can't believe Hiei agreed to "owe her one." LOL!! She's going to negate the benefit of the favor he will collect, isn't she? ^_^ So, did Koenma actually agree to the favor? I'll have to re-read that part. Interesting tidbit of info about Naraku sending loved ones' body parts to the leaders of places he was about to overrun. Kagome seemed to know about that. The mystery behind what happened with her in the past just keeps getting bigger and bigger. Good chappy!
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Reviewed By: Catsed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 16:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Alot of people who try to make Kagome Yuske's cousin fail miserably. You rocked it! i can wait for the next update!:)
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 23:39 EST
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Oh snap a pinky?! N well, I don't know about K but i would have been gettin' all types of smart mouth with Hiei talkin all the smack. I was just waiting for her to be like "If you u kill me i win, if i beat u i win." and then like snap her fingers (like at school when a girl says something smart, snaps her fingers, and everyone in the backgorund goes : "Oh no she didn't!")
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 22:53 EST
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dude, wierd. whose pinky? FL
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Group Of Story Fans* MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!
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Title: chapter 11
Reviewed By: yanagi4387 On: January 21, 2008 17:17 EST
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I loved it it was really great! poor kagome hiei wants her lol...amd not in the way we want! lol
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 23:53 EST
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Awesome! This is one of my favorite chapters so far. ^_^ Hmmm. Hiei's latest dream was rather troubling. He's developing a bloodlust? For HER blood? THAT could be a problem. LOL!! At first, I thought that his draining her of her blood would kill her, but, ... he rearranged them as they had been lying earlier and seemed to be waiting for something to happen. Did I read that correctly? Or am I reading something into it? (And, of course, the hints about the previous intimacies between them were very well done.) I thought Kagome's story was good. Too bad for her that Yusuke wasn't buying any of it. LOL!! I am wondering if Hiei may have a particular favor in mind now. He seemed quite anxious to secure it from Koenma. He is fearing his own loss of control. I really enjoyed the way you brought him and Kagome face to face. You built up to it just right. And I was so glad to see Kagome's spunkiness reassert itself as she went on the offensive with him. Naturally, he was ready to attack. Then the Jagan just went haywire, confirming Hiei's thoughts about her. Way to back her up, Yusuke. LOL!! And then we have the mysterious delivery of the partial finger to gnaw on until the next chapter. Excellent job!! I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: capuano29 On: January 07, 2008 21:18 EST
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luv this fic please keep writing ill be waiting for updates keep up the great work but don't work yourself into the ground =] ja ne
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what happens with Kagome and Hiei, also what happns when they figure out it is Naraku that has a connection to the spider. How will they keep Kagome safe and what happened to Kieko.
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 01:55 EST
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happy new year!! i know the feeling of not being able to get started on a chapter and being in a slump. i'm in a bit of one right now. *sigh* wonder if the monk is anyone specific...or if koenma will come across one we know. *snicker* hehe. ima waitin on the next chapter. FL
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Reviewed By: Random person leaving you a review On: December 30, 2007 05:07 EST
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This is the first fanfic in a while that's had me so sucked in! I absolutely love it so far and I can't wait to see what else happens! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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