| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
| Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
Title: Attention, all ramen-raiding radians!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is it Tsunade? Update soon! And no more groping for me. Back to petty theft. *Grabs Mr. Wuffums* The world's made up of numbers! I've been reverse-engineering my desired solution all along! And here it is! Drown in the sea of imaginary numbers! Any tree can drop an apple. I'll drop the freaking moon! CRUNCH! I'll add it to the heap! *Throws Mr. Wuffums onto scrap heap* Every inch of my work is flawlessly calculated. Look at the perfectly understated silhouette. How can you not see the beauty!? *Sakura knocks him out* 3.1415926535897932384626433832795028841971693993751058209749445923078164 062862089986280348253421170679821480865132823066470938446095! *Stands back up* But I was refactored, through the refinery sigil, into...this! This body, this power...all through the magic of Taboo psycho-animation! (Anyone guess who I'm immitating?) *Sakura attacks, Destenyne steps out of the way* Zetta slow!
|
Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: October 14, 2008 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
good chapter and the randomness *omochao appears* oh god help me lol anyways if i met you in real life i would hug you right now *hugs you anyways* cant wait till next chappie with more randomness *beats omochao and kakashi with a stick*
|
Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 03:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter it was funny and i really liked it....and i have been meaning to say something before but i forgot hehehe so i will say it now i think u want overboard with making Lee and now Guy look retarded with the youth stuff but its still funny as hell that being said they are really retarded anyway great story looking forward to more of your work again you are the BEST
|
Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: October 07, 2008 15:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Is the story done or no? if it is ill be sad :( i dont want this story to end so soon but i cant control your actions hope your next story will be just as good
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too many things happen when others fight. Oh, right that's your ideas. Hope you keep up the story.
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice. I didn't know anyone could tell some scary story. But, Naruto's was weak. Sorry dude. Nice going keep more comming. And my story is going to be on hold a little longer. Sorry
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story. Your stories still rock!
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet the guys are embarriesed of doing that....but, I bet they don't care..hope you got more later.
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, love it, love it! Make mroe please
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good. I didn't know they could sing. Nice one.
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only got one word to say to this one..... AWSOME!!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super story!!! I didn't know they would do that. Keep this up. It's getting better than before.
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, it's me again! I read this one and wow, it's still super cool! Hope you continue your stories.
|
Reviewed By: Coolcat64 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2008 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, remember me? Sorry about that. Anyway, I read this one and it's still funny. Nice work on it.
|
Title: hola
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2008 16:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
HII I LIKE THIS CHAPTER 2 IT WAS FUNNY INO IS ALWAYS PMSING ITS FUNNY I CANT WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THE NEW STORY YOU WERE TALKIN ABOUT WELL I HAVE TO GO SKOOL TOMARROW BYE :D
|
| Pages (10): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 › » ] |
