| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was pretty good and all, but something was missing. It's nothing personal it's just that the story's starting to get a little predictable *cue uncomfortable shocking silence*. There where no plot twists that made laugh and say OMG in my seat like the other chapters did. Bottom line is you really need to think up some new material,I'm just being honest you. I do hope you understand, a wise television show once told me that if people don't tell us there's something wrong then we can never improve. And about the pairings for your new fic, I vote on Shikamaru and Temari.
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 22, 2008 15:06 CDT
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good chapter and you spelled nodded wrong the entire story how come no one noticed oh well good stories except inos *looks at ino* *ino looks back* *kicks ino in a pool* take that bitch anyway cant wait for the next story *shoots lee* stupid idiot
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Title: NO!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great as usua...hello sango...nice weather we're having. Sango: Die! Destenyne:Wait! Spare me and I will give you a cookie. Sango:Okay *poof* D: Shippo?! You tricked me! Return the... Sango: A little bird told me you...get back here! Hiraikotsu! D:No! Captain Ichimaru! HELP! Gin:Actually I really am a bad guy. D:Oh you say that but you don't mean ...wah! *clonk* Who...uses giant boomerangs anyway...*dies* *rub rub* Sango:What the hell?! Chizuru: Hi there *runs*
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really a good chapter! I am so sad that the story is almost over, but all good things come to an end sometime, right? Anyways, update soon and I can't wait for your next story!! :)
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Reviewed By: Dante Son Of Sparda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2008 04:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter your really good at this stuff. can't wait for your next story sounds like its going to be really good....and by the way i think it should be Temari and shika but thats just me anyway keep up the great work. YOUR THE BEST!!!!!!
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Title: well?
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 17:09 CDT
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Was I right? Well was I? Update soon! I want to know.
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 06:24 CDT
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hahaha that was a great chapter!! Kiba's story was really good, too! Update soon!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2008 21:58 CDT
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OMG I LOVED IT Lees story wuz funny hes like youthful man and women and there out of green spandex :D
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 09, 2008 15:59 CDT
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this story would be even better if you included more characters like gaara or somebody but this story is great keep up the great work
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Title: A pervert am I
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 19:25 CDT
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yes yes I am. We all are especialy that guy...where'd he go? Liked the chapter. Escpecialy naruto's about the ramen raiding radian...er...zombie. Can you tell us even an little bit about your next fic. PWEASE!!! Also Naruto and Kiba's arguement came from inuyasha. It was based off Koga and Inu arguing...Also at least I'm not as big a pervert as Miroku. *sees sango* *rub rub* Sango: pervert *turns and sees miroku* Miroku: Yes? Sango:*slaps him* Destenyne:*crawls away*
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Reviewed By: Sonicrider14 On: September 07, 2008 12:16 CDT
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great chapter great stories except lees his sucked balls lol anyway *looks at shikamaru* *whacks him with the staff in the head* i dont like him anyway good chapter cant wait for the next one
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Horible, horible, horible, is the exact opposite of this story(had you worried there for a second didn't I). This chap is just so good the only way to describe is by telling you the opposite of how good it is. Oh and btw once again you have made one minor spelling mistake in your authors note. One more thing, congrats on the A you got in biology.
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Title: this is from naratolover94
Reviewed By: cake1794 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2008 19:20 CDT
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yay that was great i feel special great story so far well bye :D
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: September 01, 2008 17:20 CDT
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i feel your pain sister SCHOOL SUCKS BALLS WORSE THEN SASUKE!!!! and i start school on thursday and im not happy T_T oh and just so u know im a guy
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Title: *being held back by Choji and Shino*
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2008 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(you spelled Kawaii wrong....) LET ME AT HER! I WILL GET HER! NAUROT IS MIIIINE! *is knocked out by Sasuke*
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