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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 23:33 CST
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i think i should go and take an antidepressant now. -- please inform me if this is not going to end happy so i can ignore the alerts. ginny does NOT do angst. ♠ the emotion was very well conveyed-- maybe too well. ♣ off to immerse myself in silliness before i sink any deeper. ♦
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so wait....it's over? I'm confused...well anyway, I liked this story. Good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... very sad chapter... feel bad for kagome... miroku & sango should have told kagome the truth about shippou... too bad inuyasha came too late... what will happen now... where is shippou... where did kagome go... what will inuyasha do now?... update when you can... please and thank you... Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 18:38 CDT
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PLEASE write more! i love this story! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got to say that this is pretty original. Also you keep everyone in character. Good Job. Great Story.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 22:43 CDT
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this was sad but overall very good i feel for kagome i miss Shippo:( i hope they find him soon:) keep up the good work! have fun on ur vaca!:)
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Reviewed By: ecqsmail [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i highly enjoy this story. i hope you write more. have fun on your vaca.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 15:02 CDT
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So glad to see more of this! I've missed you sweetie. Good to see K gather her courage and head back, and that she's been working her powers too. Interesting that IY isn't there, but off with Kikyo, wonder how that will turn out? ;) Should make for nice drama and angst, and good opportunity to delve into both their emotions at this point in the story.
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 03:14 CDT
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Poor Kagome... Its great that she made herself stronger though... she can finally prove shes not weak... please update as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice of kagome to visit her friends in the feudal era... kinda sad that she's lost touch with them though... they didn't tell kagome that shippou is missing... hope inuyasha/kagome pairing will come soon... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 19:12 CDT
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please please please update! this is really really good:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 06:55 CDT
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I hope you'll update soon... this is really interesting and I want to see Kagome come back with the group! Can she do it without breaking her word?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 03:23 CDT
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Shippou left! And the group is now tracking HIM instead of the shards. How different from Inuyasha said to Kagome that day he drove her away. The irony is killing me. I love the way you have described both kagome and inuyasha's suffering, -- in the way they both feel cold and detached from everyone and everything else. And Inuyasha IS realizing that Kikyou does not fill the place that Kagome did, no matter how powerful or skilled. He is wrong about one very important thing, though. Kikyou does NOT need him. She never did. And that's the main reason why they never would worked out, even if Naraku had never interfered. She's already told him she just wants to rest when this is over. There's no place for him with her. There never was. Kikyou refused his help and protection time and time again. Kagome needs him, and that has made all the difference. Protecting her gave him the strength to overcome impossible odds again and again. She brought him friends, while Kikyou only brought him her own occasional company and kept him isolated. He learned new techniques and masterd Tetsusaiga's many powers because of Kagome and her belief in him. Really, everything he is and everything he has he owes to Kagome. And I think/hope he is finally realizing that. But that knowledge is going to come at a great price, isn't it? I wonder who Shippou has gone to see? Well, I finally caught up with you and now I'm going to have to wait for your next chapter. This is wonderful!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 03:06 CDT
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I LOVED chapter 5! Inuyasha visiting her on his human night was very significant. But she had been busy trying to put him behind her. I actually loved the small mention that he had held her heart, once. But she believed she never held his. I love the way he is now able to see Kikyou every day and yet everything is falling apart and he doesn't seem to be happy with it or her. And now, Kagome is the one he is going away to see. There's a certain poetic justice and beauty to that. And he told her things we know he never told Kikyou, even if he still doesn't tell Kagome everything. He trusts her with his secret. And he spent the night lying next to her. It was all beautiful. I especially loved his thoughts when she had fainted, -- the way he was so desperate to memorize everything about her in case he never saw her again. He never wants to forget her. This was a fantastic chapter and you really fed my need for some of those tender feelings to come through. I'm still extremely curious about that wind and the "message." I can't wait to see it all revealed!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 02:52 CDT
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I love it that Inuyasha hasn't shared the secret of his human night with Kikyou. That should be telling him something about his own feelings. I like the way Kagome is pouring over the words of their fight and coming to some realizations. The shimmer. You've got me sitting on the edge of my seat dying to see what is in the wind. And Inuyasha came to see her.
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