| "Silver Winds" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm i wonder who that was at the end.... anyways i love it!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 19:11 CDT
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Very nice. Love the emotion, so deep and angsty. You always handle it perfectly. The changes are much better. Smoother, and I caught the last this time around. Who is it? How do they know? Aaaaack, the suspense!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems the drama will continue... and some action coming up too... wonder what kagome will do... what is that shimmer... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 02:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. I feel that it helped to understand what Kagome was thinking as she left Inuyasha. This helps bring the story along, and entwines the interests of the reader. Good Job!!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 00:56 CDT
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shimmering winds that make individuals angry and abusive? the emotional pain was palpable. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 14:16 CDT
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Inuyasha really has an extremely bad case of foot-in-mouth disease. I don't think that he'll ever learn how to spot the symptoms to stop it. Still can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats idiot!! Inuyasha!! i hate him at times!! how can he shouted at Kagome like that!?! why couldnt he go off and find Kikyo and shout at her >.< really cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... but kinda sad... feel bad for kagome... and inuyasha is so stupid... wonder what happens next... hope this has a happy ending... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: xstargirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 19:33 CDT
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that was rather sad. but a good story. update?
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 18:54 CDT
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Oooooh what a nasty hanyou! Let's all go kick his butt, hmmmm? Oh wait, he'll get his, we just have to give it time, right? Lots of angst and misery ahead. I'm a sick, sick person, I know, but bring it on, I can't wait! Love how Kagome isn't the usual weepy/osuwari'ing thing she normally is, very good job with that, how she seems to be the one responding in a (somewhat) mature manner. And IY, so tangled up in his K/K feelings, he's strangling the one who matters most. But right in character, when confused or in doubt, strike first, ask questions later. Very well done!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! I'm eager to see how you continue with this story. I do like the cliff hanger as well. Good job!!
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Reviewed By: sisterofkatie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oooh... this is awesome! Can't wait till the next update! :D
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 06:38 CDT
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I am so excited!! This is a wonderful beginning, and I can't wait to see how you turn this out. Your characterization is always spot on, the emotions real and engrossing. This is going to be great!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oooo Kagome better be careful around him.....
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 01:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... hope kagome won't waste her summer break... she should get stronger and better with her powers to collect the jewel shards even without inuyasha & the gang... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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