| "Silver Winds" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 11:38 CST
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Hello! I just found this story recently. It's a fun read. Is Shippo going to be okay? Will Kagome get her message from the fireflies? Will Inuyasha get his head out of his arse or will one of the other characters wench it out for him? Ah the mysteries...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*panicks* SHIPPPO IS GONE!! OMG
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... lots of drama in the chapters... feel bad for kagome though... feeling sad and left out and useless... then inuyasha isn't much help either... he hasn't apologized... and he still can't seem to get his feelings in order... hope he makes a decision soon... what is that presence that is following kagome... is it good or bad... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 14:26 CST
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Great chapter!!! It shows that both have feelings for the other, no matter how hard they fight it off. Inuyasha will always be more comfortable with Kagome then the 'clay pot witch.' I'm grateful for the update, no probs on the delay, I'm sure, like other authors, that there's more going on in your life that prevents frequent updates. I know how life can be. Now if only we knew what was going on with Shippo. Nice cliffhanger!! Please update soon. We appreciate your story.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 13:04 CST
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such a lovely chapter, touching how they seemed to be able to share as much as they did. maybe a few more conversations where they both open up and get closer. it seems even in the manga they really don't 'talk'. i liked the fact that he held her throughout the night, it all should show that the things he said weren't completely what he felt. maybe the time apart will 'make the heart grow fonder'. . . the curious silver/gray wind/fireflies that shippo and souta saw, i'm anxious about what they have to do with anything and the message that you mentioned. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 01:34 CST
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This is a nice chapter. Reunited K and IY, without the fighting and tension b/t them. Got them away from everyone to talk. They really need to do more of that, hmmm? Love the 'cuddle', and how K handles it. The best way, I've found, to get past embarrassment or uncertainty, is just to act as though nothing were out of the ordinary, nothing unusual. Enough of this and IY would probably open up more, and even start to expect it! Intersting that Shippou is missing. Did he run off, for loss of Kagome, or was he taken? And what were the 'winds' and what was their purpose? Why didn't they stick around? Just who or what is behind all this, anyway?? Can't wait til next time, to find out!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2007 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like your story!! keep updating
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems like the group is falling apart... wonder what happens next... what will inuyasha do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 01:23 CDT
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remember when in the anime episode that they were playing yakyuken (rock-paper-scissors)? kagome brought games to her friends to entertain and occupy them on their long treks. one could imagine trying to involve kikyo in a game. . . it's good to see yasha attempting to speak with kagome, being human he just might be a bit more sympathetic and not mess up too badly. ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 14:00 CDT
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Cool. Interesting story! I can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Great story! Like how you still keep it in suspense and leave a cliff hanger. What is he going to say? Will she go back? I greatly appreciate your story. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 07:59 CDT
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Beautifully done. The word play is just lyrical, very poetic. You showed the awkwardness b/t them so well, it had me antsy. Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE angst!!! woooop lol theres way too many love dovelys out there and we need more angst!! anyways im LOVING this!!
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:04 CDT
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good job!!! it's sad, but i can't wait to read the next chapter
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 17:45 CDT
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Very nice. Love the revisions, much clearer/smoother. Methinks interesting times are ahead!
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