| "Silver Winds" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... sad turn of events... kagome left... where is shippou.... what will inuyasha do now... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 20:11 CST
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Aha, I made it! This chapter was def full of tension and angst, and very well done! You haven't lost your ability to beautifully descibe actions and emotion, it comes through strongly. Nice work with the story, I thought it was very well tied in. Interesting scene with K and Sango, things just get more and more muddled for all of them, eh? Very nice work with IY, it will def be interesting to see how he takes K's absence. It's one thing to know someone is at an expected place, albeit away from you, and quite another to realize they are actually 'away' from you, with no info on their whereabouts. Should be fun seeing him go through this. (yep, I'm just cruel like that, lol) Can't wait to hear from you on the next chapter, so give me a holler!
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Reviewed By: Angel alex1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this fanfic is very intense. I like it a lot but it really leaves your head spinning. I like the way it writen, easy to read yet intelligently worded. I hope to read more chapters soon. It might help answer some of the questions that are giving me a headache. Thanks for the enjoyable read... Please continue!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 23:33 CST
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i think i should go and take an antidepressant now. -- please inform me if this is not going to end happy so i can ignore the alerts. ginny does NOT do angst. ♠ the emotion was very well conveyed-- maybe too well. ♣ off to immerse myself in silliness before i sink any deeper. ♦
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so wait....it's over? I'm confused...well anyway, I liked this story. Good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2008 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... very sad chapter... feel bad for kagome... miroku & sango should have told kagome the truth about shippou... too bad inuyasha came too late... what will happen now... where is shippou... where did kagome go... what will inuyasha do now?... update when you can... please and thank you... Happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 18:38 CDT
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PLEASE write more! i love this story! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Im a kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got to say that this is pretty original. Also you keep everyone in character. Good Job. Great Story.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 22:43 CDT
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this was sad but overall very good i feel for kagome i miss Shippo:( i hope they find him soon:) keep up the good work! have fun on ur vaca!:)
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Reviewed By: ecqsmail [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i highly enjoy this story. i hope you write more. have fun on your vaca.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 15:02 CDT
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So glad to see more of this! I've missed you sweetie. Good to see K gather her courage and head back, and that she's been working her powers too. Interesting that IY isn't there, but off with Kikyo, wonder how that will turn out? ;) Should make for nice drama and angst, and good opportunity to delve into both their emotions at this point in the story.
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 03:14 CDT
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Poor Kagome... Its great that she made herself stronger though... she can finally prove shes not weak... please update as soon as you can!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice of kagome to visit her friends in the feudal era... kinda sad that she's lost touch with them though... they didn't tell kagome that shippou is missing... hope inuyasha/kagome pairing will come soon... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 19:12 CDT
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please please please update! this is really really good:) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 06:55 CDT
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I hope you'll update soon... this is really interesting and I want to see Kagome come back with the group! Can she do it without breaking her word?
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