| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] |
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Reviewed By: jessie6491 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 13:10 PDT
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Don't get me wrong, this story is good so far, but are you going to put more dialogue or action into it soon? it just seems a little slow and like there isn't much happening in each chapter. I'm still curious as to whether or not Sam will be locked up the entire story. anyhoosers, please update soon! -jessie6491
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 12:41 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: FriskyPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 10:36 PDT
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Great new chapter. He FINALLY told him, "Hey, I'm NOT A DOG, so I don't eat dog food." Maybe he'll eventually ask what she's half of....and then she'll tell him HUMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: brownie31 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is very good. The details of feelings and motivations of the characters are very well done. Kurt is one angry character and for good reason as it seems. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please, update soon. I can't wait to see where this is going next! Will she get out? How will she get out? I have my theories but I can never be too sure what's going to happen. This author always leaves me surprised and satisfied with the way she writes. Good Work!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 08:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!! Finally some progress, now he can look it up and get some information, he can find out Sam is half human. I'm so happy, just when I thought this chapter was going to be a tear jerker again, we have some positive developments. hahah
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 06:26 PDT
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Aweeee. Kawaiiiii...he thinks her laugh is a pleasant sound...we'll that's right go ahead and shock his system...she a Hanyou..half demon. Meaning half something else as well..o what's that half human? We'll i'll be!!! There are humans that would procreate with a demon a monster?! Lol just a lil sarcasm there but I'm sure u get the point..can't wait to read more...ur phenomenal.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 04:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd be sick too. dog food...
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 04:23 PDT
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Kurt's pissing me off. He's a baka. The scientists are pissing me off more. What douches. She's half human for crying out loud, what they are doing is disgusting.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 04:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:blink: They...had an actual, honest to goodness conversation. Yay! He's finally figuring out that Sam is smart, and not just some blood thirsty animal. I wonder if he will figure out what hanyou means. That could be intresting. Sam's kinda stupid for saying that, actually.
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 00:39 PDT
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Oh! We're getting somewhere. At least Kurt now knows that Sam's a hanyou. I hope the plot continues to develop, but hopefully in a faster way. ^^;; Once again, thanks for the update, Sue. It's great to see Sam talk more, especially w/ some attitude and pride. =^.^=
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Reviewed By: PikaMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 23:45 PDT
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Wow...another great chapter that leaves me longing for more. I'm sure you've heard this a billion times but it can't hurt to hear it again. LOVE YOU, Sue, for writing such awesome and heart-wrenching stories. My feelings go out to the characters every time. Felt bad for Kurt, but it was nice to see a bit of his past. Makes me wonder how he went from a some-what stable environment into the one that he's living now. Revenge can do horrible things to a person. But, I'm glad he still has that kindness inside, even if he doesn't want to admit it. Glad he gave Sam some water, out of his own choice. Things are getting SLOWLY better. =^.^= Ah, Sammy, poor poor Sam. T.T
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 21:43 PDT
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update update update! : )
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 20:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness, I just want to hug her and rub her puppy ears! She really needs a hug. Poor thing. They've got her so messed up, she's questioning her entire believe system! :sigh: Once again, the only reassurance I have is that you love happy endings.
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Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 20:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish Sam and Kurt would at least talk! I want so bad for her to be found.... hopefully soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From what you are doing I doubt that Sam is going to be getting out of that place any time soon...
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