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| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] | | Pages (86): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 11:32 PDT
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YAY! Everyone's starting to like Drevin! I was surprised that Bas actually named his son after Kurt. I thought that was sweet!! OOH I can't wait until the next chapter! He has almost everyone on his side... that is except Kich but he'll come around right?
| Title: Chapter 76: Awwwwwwah! And Awwwwwwah some more!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan is so...HIM! I LMAO at his teasing banter but almost wet myself as he panicked over Sydnie's labor pains. Kurt to the rescue and the accolades were well deserved! I wonder what Kich thought of it. Yanno what? This is too good a moment for the dude so I won't go there. Yay! Sydnie had her kitten, um, puppy...um, kippy? Putten? Hmmm, how do the youkai dynamics work in this case, I wonder. OMG, I smiled so wide when I read this: Samantha laughed and leaned down to kiss him, his lips warm, welcome. "You really are my hero today, huh?" You found your own personal hero, Sami! And you thought no one would ever measure up to Griffin! Well, there ya go! You know what else was pretty neat, Sue? The makeshift Post-It Kurt fashioned for the barrier. That was such a creative piece of fluff. That, and many other reasons, are what keep you one of my favorite fanfiction authoresses ever--your creative mind and sense of humor and depth and grasp of human nature. Another gem, once again! Nice to have a little calm before the storm. And, yes, I DO feel one HELL of a storm coming. Tropical depression Kichiro. Oh, shit... **ducks and covers with my hoarde of water bottles and can goods**
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go Kurt! Well, that will go a long way in his case. I don't see how they can really scowl at him anymore, unless of course you're Kich. Ah well, it really is going to take a miracle for Kich to like Kurt.
| Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 05:04 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! I'm all happy and fuzzy now!! :) I'm sorry, I can't help this one: hahahaha...band camp. *points to DonthatemecuzImbeautiful's comment. ok i'm done! (meaning no harm, just being a dork) I'm glad drevin was the one who helped sydnie cause it caused everyone, excluding kich, to see him in the same light as sam does, in a way...i love tanny's name, by the way. it wouldn't fit anyone else!!
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 02:43 PDT
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The fact the a prolonged bout of sobbing (finally finding the case) gave way to a squealy meltdown (Tanny) means I basically look like the Wicked Witch by now. "Iiiii'mmm meeeeltiiinggg!" But it's so sad... and SO CUTE! Respectively.
| Title: Happy Birthday to Me!
Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 19:31 PDT
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Omg I have missed this story, you have no idea! lol I have been at band camp for the past two weeks and the only thing I am capable of doing when I get home is eating, packing my lunch for the next day, showering and crashing. I've had absolutely no time to read at all :( But today was my birthday so everyone took it easy on me, thus giving me the energy needed to both catch up on the past 6 chapters I have missed, and write this review saying that you are still the most awesome writer ever! Thanks as always, this chapter was the best birthday present I could have asked for :)
| Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:33 PDT
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Closure for the sake of mind, sweet. 'Tanny'.... I saw it coming and I was still surprised! This could very well be the best chapter yet, Sue.
| Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 18:04 PDT
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Oh its perfect! LOL She sure does answer to it! LOL. I did not see him killing them, I think that he should be trained by Kagome and the could work as a team he could avenge other families and he's kind of the safest person she could be with. And capture would never happen with two.
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 15:55 PDT
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Amazing chapter!! Keep it up and update soon please! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 75: Cheesy grin time? Uh, YES!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 14:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Step right up, folks and witness the amazing Sueric! No, don't crowd, there's plenty of story for all! Yes, we have it all in Purity 8, Ladies and Gents. Just check out Chapter 75 for instance...angst, drama, romance, and one rather life-altering conclusion! But, wait, there's more! See our main male character, Kurt, as he comes to grip with the facts of a lifelong vengence quest gone--POOF!--before his very eyes and the turmoil of residual grief! But, there's a wonderful plot twist to this broken man, everybody! A new purpose, a new meaning, a new reason to exist--a family! Yes, Ladies and Gents, it IS quite a tear jerker--by the way, all packages of Kleenex are on sale for $1.99 for today's chapter only--why, there's even a name for the little tyke of the story! 'Stinky Butt' is now and forevermore 'Tanny'! *****yeah, having a weird announcer with bullhorn and too much caffiene in his system moment...regular review? Okay, here I go!***** I. Am. SO. Happy! I'm so glad those youkai were dealt with and, isn't THAT just poetic justice that Kurt--young, assumed weak and vulnerable--put up a barrier to fry, most likely 70% or more PURIFY, one of the lousy bastards that cut down his uncle and aunt! Yeah! YEAH! YEEEEEEEEEEEEEAH!!!! Samantha can FINALLY mate her Mr. Love handles and--Oh yeah. Kich. **blows out a breath that sounds like a balloon deflating** Well, gee, this is gonna be awkward. Yeah... Great closure on this sad life of Kurt. More to come, I know, but at least he knows the youkai are taken care of. Anxiously awaiting your next chapter! This chapter was a treasure to read, Sue!
| Title: Chapter 74: One big happy family, Sue? **hinthintnudgenudge**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, would you just LOOK at the LOVE! **happy sniff an' stoof** Oh, YES, I'm so glad everyone was looking on when Kurt had his little family moment with his girls. The bond between Sam and Stinky Butt just get stronger and sweeter the more I read and just makes me wanna go out and buys a friggin Cabbage Patch or somethin' to squeeze to death! (moving right along...) And, Cain, you hypocrite--I'm telling Gin! No, I'm gonna glomp you good! You tell 'em, Cain! Kurt IS 'Daddy'! And you couldn't tag team someone's emotions/logic better than with Ben at your side. i think you guys handled things rather well. Got Kurt REALLY thinking and not in a vague 'If only; if only...' type of way, for once! KUDOS! **hugs self**
| Title: Chapter 73: Ho-hum...here we go
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love how concerned the Conors are for the well-being of Stinky Butt and how the wife spoke up about Kurt possibly wanting the child. That had to be hard but showed great character. Melted my heart. I love the closeness growign between Kurt and Sam and the fact that she's sleeping with him, like it SHOULD be. Kich & Belle are rather intense and, of course, with a couple as lovely dovely, amorous, and downright touch-feely as they are, yes, the 'you can hear a Kleenex's descent to the floor--BEFORE it touches it' atmosphere is VERY noticable. And, HUZZAH for Gin and Cain--the voices of reason and discretion! That's right! Give 'em Stinky Butt! It shows so OBVIOUSLY that they want her. Whoot! yeah! YEA--okay, quiting, now. Great, EMOTIONAL chapter, Sue! And the comic relief was an added bonus, too...oh, the punishment! LOL!
| Title: Chapter 72: Kich & Belle face off--d'oh sh*t!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, that was one of the uppermost thoughts in my mind after reading this chapter. Kich yelled at Belle-chan. Shirittos, Sue! I'm 'bout to have a CORONARY here! I DEFINITELY see Inuyasha's stubborness in Kich and somehow it reminds me of how much he blamed himself for Gin getting broken down as much as she did in P4--now he's all about preventative measures to the point of stubborn denial. Oh, Kich! As a parental fugure myself, I SO feel his pain. Even if you DO know both sides of the story--which he REFUSES to see or, when given kernels of truth, squashes to the back of his mind--you rage has a tendency to overlap better judgement. Ya just wanna glomp him and biff him good at the same time, but ONLY cuz ya know BOTH sides and all the details as a reader. I'm frustrated for him but hope he opens his mind, heart, and eyes soon. Dollbaby's grown up, Kich, and she's nobody's fool. You raised her well, now let her show you all she's learned.
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:48 PDT
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Im so happy that Kurt decided to let go of his past. It still may be hard for him, trying not to remember what happened. But I think with time he'll be able to overcome his nightmares. Sort of the same way Griffin was able to. Now that Kurt is willingly open to the future he can now focus on his relationship with Sam and stinky butt. It should prove interesting. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out!
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 13:28 PDT
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It seems kind of appropriate, her being named Tanny... I just wonder if they're going to come up with a 'lenghened' version, like Tanya or something. A 'professional' name to use later in life and at work... Just a thought, Keep up the good work, dark
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