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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 16:54 PDT
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We can let an old man live in his own world and with his own rules. Keep up the good work, dark
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Title: Chapter 82: That was a cute proposal!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 16:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwah! I ADORE Tanny! That was just precious! I'm getting a little antsy about Kich though...
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Title: Chapter 81; Kich, don't be a hypocrite, now...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's so torn and mad inside but, when your YV is againts an idea, that's deep and shows stubborness to the hilt. I get it, his YV gets it...hell, even KICH gets it. But, when it comes to your kid. I feel your pain but for the sake of your daughter's happiness, relent, dude. Kich, don't be a hypocrite, now...
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 15:20 PDT
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haha Fairies! Ryomaru never did tell Sami about that did he? lol Well I guess she'll ask when they get back. Thanks Sue! This chapter made me laugh something awful, it was a good change from a long day at school. It was funny because right before I read this chapter me and my sis were talking about old sayings and the last one just happened to be "Don't you sass me." great chapter keep it up!! :D
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 10:54 PDT
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I loved that chapter. I actually teared a little bit at the end. Old Granger asking Sam if she was a fariy with hope in his eyes. That got me started. i hope that he attends to Kurt and Sami's wedding. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the enxt one to come out!
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Title: Chapter 80: Good gravy, Sue, I FELT that love scene!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 10:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was shudder-worthy in it's beauty and reverence and meaning. Every touch, every stuttered entreaty. Your love scenes make me pause and close my eyes and savor them as they are--a scene that becomes real and sparkles in living color as I read and it's like this warm blanket of giddyness falls over me over the characters involved for all they go through and all it took to get thme to the point they're at in these scenes. And the depth of connection in those bonding moments are, to me, well, special. My cousin says I moon over the loves scenes, constanly reminding me I'm reading a fictional story, but... Well, she may be right. I don't exactly stand in front of a mirror when I read 'em but...well, somewhere in the world, true love like this exists every day. People that were made for each other Do meet and DO become that balm for each other's hearts and minds. And Souls. And it goes far beyond a physical act, a perfunctory coming together, a thing allowed, assumed owed, acceptable; no, it's beyond precious and you KNOW this is no cliche, that this other half of you is truly gonna stay with you. Forever. And make the act of lovemaking LOVE making. I really enjoyed this scene. It was really special. Also, it was really sweet how Daddy Kurt was worrying over Tanny. He's gonna be a big ol' pushover, ain't he, Sue? LOL! This chapter couldn't have been written better IMHO. You should see the sappy sentimental expression on my face. It's chessy as hell but real. That's what your writing does to me, Sue. It just pulls me along and blurs the fine line between fact and fiction until all I can do is...feel it. Then it's real. I can't really help it. My cousin tells me it's because I'm a poet and I tend to analyze things deeply. Heh. Maybe. I just think you've got skills and, yeah, skills, Sue. Great read!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 07:47 PDT
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Poor Old Granger. He had him a fairy once, too, huh? Well, Kurt was worried for nothing. Now, I wonder what Old Granger and Tanny will do once they meet each other.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 07:24 PDT
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The ending was very sweet. I'm interested to see what the next chapter holds. And I'm anxious to see interactions between kurt and the 'king' of all demons as I now call my sesshyboo. Lol and old granger and well...everyone else. Haha...how does a grown man still get beat for sassing someone. That's funny. Lol. Sue ur so cooky. :-D
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 06:39 PDT
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Crazy old man ain't so crazy...aww.
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 06:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol!! Fairy indeed!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 05:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fairy.... he isn't that bad.... I bet Sami is going to ask the couple of men in her life who would fit that description, if that was them... (although you have already written it earlier... I still think It was funny...)
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 19:22 PDT
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So Saqm and Kurt are gong to make a trip to Old Grangers house? The things that Sam will learn from him... or not! LoL! This should be loads of fun! Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait till the next one comes out!
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 18:54 PDT
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Aww... Poor Kich. I know he wants to give her away but not to Kurt. His decision will definately hurt Sam, and maybe even Kurt. At least Cain made an effort and painted Tanny's room. And it's good that Tanny likes her new "tanny" room. I'm a little afraid for Kurt and Sam, I mean having ot face Kurts grandfather... why do I have a feeling that we've met him before?? *Wink wink nudge nudge* well can't wait until the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 17:04 PDT
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You know...I was just thinking about how Kichiro wouldn't be able to give Sami to Kurt at the wedding. I felt so bad for him at that part; I almost started tearing up at work lol!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't tell us (Why do I say that and mean do???) that Kurt Grandfather is the reincarnation of Miroku's "father figure"?
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