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| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] | | Pages (86): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 11:17 PDT
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i hope belle and kich start to accept him soon! and i hope sami and kurt keep stinky butt lol
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 09:50 PDT
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I'm crying for the hundredth time in as many days thanks to this story. Kurt and Belle's little heart-to-heart was just so... I dunno how to say it. "sweet" isn't quite the right word, or "sad". "Poignant", maybe. And I hope the little girl stays. I think Sami's right... The Conors can't ever understand the little girl the way Sami and Kurt can...
| Title: BRAVO!!!!
Reviewed By: serenastar122189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 08:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You dod an excelent job and I cant wait for the next chapter, Keep up the good work, and dont let your ideas stray. You have a good storyline that could easily pan out to 100 chapters or more if played in the write direction. Don't be afaid to shoot for the stars, and keep writeing. Know that I will eagearly await the rest of your insalments to the story, and read them reventaly. Your Fan Serenastar
| Title: Awww
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 08:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Althought the brutal beating Kurt has taken upon himself to endure and not fight back. This chapter was meaningful and meaning-full he has been able to retell the story of his tragic childhood and swear he will watch over Sammi. I like the chapter, it is one of my favorites up until now :) Thank you Sue!
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 08:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You go Belle! You try to understand girl! Now for Kich... oh boy...
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 08:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And...I love Belle again! Not that I ever stopped, I was just very frustrated with her. Now that she has come to our side, maybe she can get Kich to stop and smell the roses, so to speak. Yeah, good luck with that Belle-chan!
| Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 22:39 PDT
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I've finally caught up! and its soo good lol the last chappy had to be the best for me! it was so sweet when he told sam how he felt. i loved it! cant wait to read the next chappy!
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 16:03 PDT
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Im so excited to see how Kich and Belle start to except Kurt. I know it going to be a slow and probably painful process but what will lead them to befriending Kurt? Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out.
| Title: Chapter 70: You GO, Sam (and your YV, too)!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter did a lot to quelling my curiousity about Sam's psyche post-confinement. It makes sense, once I read it, how she would be a little nervous at verging out on her own--well, with Stinky Butt this time--and I'm glad she did well and her family didn't bum rush her and she ran into Maddy. Wow, when I read she woke up in Kurt's arms, Sue, I TRULY thought it was a dream. I'd love the trio to become a family but at this time in the story, most folks are probably against it. If she leaves, I'm gonna miss her and her never-ending pursuit of 'tanny'. LOL! This chapter was just one big fat juicy glomp--did my heart good.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 15:00 PDT
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Hmm...I wonder if Belle is going to tell Kich about what Sami said. I really hope that they can forgive him, it's going to take a while, but still!
| Title: Chapter 69: OMG, Sue, when he told her my liver quivered!!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 13:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He told her! He tolds her! He TOLD her! OMG, Sue, this chapter was like an early birthday gift or something! I'm so friggin' HAPPY! **glomps Sue** Okay, when Stinky Butt jumped in and said "Tanny" I nearly laughed like a loon. Oh, children and their unknowing cockblockery...lol! Still, that was precious! I'm glad Kurt's a stand up guy, doubts and guilt notwithstanding. He takes a licking and keeps on ticking--well, maybe with a bruise or 20, a slight limp, and acracked rib or 3--and I can see him getting the beatdown of a lifetime to defend his right to defend his mate! I just hope noone gets purified in the process. I loved the way you dropped that inescapable truth at the end, though. It's in the back of most of our minds that things aren't gonna be honky dory on all fronts but I ALSO know that he'll have adversaries in the midst of the chaos to see them through. It'll work out in the end but I'm thinking their'll be more unrest between Kick and Kurt than InuYasha and Cain...I shall see...
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 12:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awwww Sami and the little girl are soo cute. But really Sue I'm with Sami can we have a name to call this girl by already. (sighs) I don't know which side I'm on here, as much as I think Kurt and Sami should keep the girl I can also see why giving her to this family might be best. GAH! The questions this Purity story raises. Sue I think you enjoy throwing these kind of questions and thought at us and see how much we can take before our brains exploded. but anyway Loved the chapter PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
| Title: Chapter 68: Whoot! he ADMITTED it! Yay, Cain! Yay, Kurt! Yay, Sue! You RAWK! You RAWK out LOUD!!!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAWD, SUE! Chapter 68 is blubber-worthy! Every time I read about Gin diminishing after the rejection--HER rejection of Cain--my heart lodges in my throat. GAWD, those sketches...gritty and sad and...oh, hell! I need a hug! But, then, Cain did his thing and in a cleansing tell-all of a memory never gone, he turned Kurt out to the truth! He loves his 'Little Demon'!!! I'm wanting to just BACKFLIP here, Sue! I spent at least 85% of the chapter in pre-cry mode and I was thinking on the inside "Puh-LEAAAAAAAAAASE, Kurt! For ONCE, PLEASE keep it real!" and, gosh darnit--have I told you lately that I love you?--he SAID it! Of course he's not out of the woods yet, I know. Kich probably wants to tear the fur off his ass....PROBABLY? HAH! That IS to laugh! Death, slow and thorough sounds closer to the truth. But, for the sake of his baby, I know allowances will be made however grudgingly. Oh, btw, I'm so happy my guess was correct; that small part of the talk about Gin being Cain's grace, it WAS to Kurt! I'm so good at guessing...27% of the time! This chapter was so intense and I was on emotional tenterhooks the entire time. You...You...Sue, you do suspense and angst good! AWESOME!
| Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 09:18 PDT
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Amazing chapter!! Keep up the fantastic work and update soon please!! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 66 and 67: DUDE
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 08:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed, my lower lip trembled, I winced in commiseration...then I nearly passed out in shock at the very THOUGHT of Stinky Butt going to another family. But, I do understand the reasons behind Kurt's decisions in the matter. Kich is starting to remind me a lot of InuYasha where Gin was concerned and under the circumstances, I definitely understand. I love the way this story is progressing! Off to read Chapter 68, now!
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