| "That's the Way Love Goes" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2009 16:58 EDT
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I have to say, that this chapter was a shock. There were no warnings in the summary that I could see and I typically won't read fics that have the deaths of any of the main Inuyasha characters because life sucks enough as it is and I read to wash that away. Give us a warning next time, ne?
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 03:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story!!! I had to read it from the beginning... ANGST is defiantly the topic of this story!!!
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Reviewed By: InuWhisperer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 16:48 EDT
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The story is good, but I honestly don't see how you are going to turn this into a Sess/Kag fic without killing Inuyasha off. At this point, it would be extremely cruel to have her end it with him. When she had come to the realization in the previous chapter, you should have had her end it then. Now, she is pregnant and forgetting about Sesshomaru. It just seems you are digging a very deep hole. You are making it very difficult on yourself to turn the story around without it sounding contrived. I wish you luck and I am looking forward to seeing how you do it.
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Title: Happy yet sad...
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 14:30 EDT
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Gah! Kagome is pregnant with InuYasha's baby. I'm happy for them because although InuYasha is not the one for Kagome in this story...I like the guy. He is awesome. But, I'm sad because I wish it was Sesshomaru's baby. I kept hoping in my silly mind that it was really Sesshomaru's baby but it took this long for it to grow because of him being a demon and her a human. You know, that was my wishful thinking. But then I kept freaking out about how sad InuYasha would be if the baby came out with Sesshomaru's marks and then I was all happy/sad again. The things you make me go through girl! *sigh* I don't know how this will unravel but you got me hooked. Nevertheless, when Sesshomaru and Kagome do get together...please make it a looooong epilogue about them together. Pleeeeeaaaase!!! Although....it will be bitter sweet right? I feel for InuYasha...as I said before..I like the guy. Aaagghhhhh... Best, QS
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 11:00 EDT
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Great update! I hope that things slow down for you so that you have time to enjoy the spring! I really like the fact that Kagome was having issues with her pregnancy and that after 'seeing' their baby she was more accepting and loving. Keep up the great work girl!
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Reviewed By: Akaine On: April 19, 2009 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, it's just so captivating and amusing!
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Title: "That the Way Love Goes"
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops! Sorry forgot about this in my last review.. I would like to let you know that there is a mistake in chapter XV. A miko is from the shinto religion. So Kagome would follow shintoism not buddhism.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 01:30 EDT
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I'm glad that you updated finally!! I feel so sorry for all three of them. Feeling sorry for Sesshomaru for being stupid and too proud; Kagome for being stupid and making the wrong move and ended up being so unhappy for so long and finally Inuyasha for being used as a "crutch". I do admire Inuyasha too, for being so strong and caring and loving for Kagome even though he knows that she loves Sesshomaru and still thinks of him.
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Title: Great update!
Reviewed By: Quiet Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 21:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this story this year and I am thrilled that you continue to update it. I do look forward to Kagome and Sesshomaru getting together but does that really mean that when they do then the story would end? I would like to see what would their lives be like together afterwards. I understand however, if that is as far as inspiration goes then so be it. But if it could continue then count on me as an avid reader who would keep on waiting for every single word that you write about this story. :-D The way that you depicted when Kagome and Sesshomaru got together (from the beginning until they made love), was fodder for hours of daydreaming. *Drool* The concept of living for centuries was also inspiration for aspiring writers like myself. Thanks for writing this story and most of all for sharing it with us. Best, QS
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 00:21 EDT
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I think you conveyed what needed to be conveyed quite nicely. The genesis of Sesshoumaru's emotional awakening, his thought process, and the reasons for his actions become crystal clear. As well, you did an excellent job of making Kagome's forgiveness of him believable. I'm looking forward to seeing how you manage to get the two of them back together again, though, with InuYasha in the middle. Surely it will go against Kagome's nature to ask for a divorce... but I'm sure, clever thing that you are, you have a plan for this, don't you? Thank you for a most enjoyable read this evening! It certainly took my mind off my own petty problems for a while and, for that, I can't thank you enough!! :D ~~Wiccan~~
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Reviewed By: DivaG On: February 02, 2009 12:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I loved hearing your version on how Kagome´s family was formed and the reason why Sesshoumaru remained close to them. It seems to me that he really didn´t stay around them on purpose, waiting for the time that Kagome was born in the future, it just happened. I hope they meet soon. She is setling for a really dull life. Congratulations anduntil next time.
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Reviewed By: DivaG On: January 19, 2009 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, now Kagome is turning into a healer? It´s interesting. I keep wondering when and how Kagome and Sesshoumaru are going to meet again, because it´s obvious that he can´t keep away from her for good now that he found her after so much time. Great chapter and until next time. DivaG
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Reviewed By: Youkailady On: January 15, 2009 20:26 EST
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heeeelllllloooo? anybody there? did you die? we're waiting! can you update soon? please?
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 03:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good!! Please don't make us suffer too long? LOL This really is a great fic!!
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Reviewed By: divaG On: January 01, 2009 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,happy New Year. I´m loving the way this story is flowing, so full of emotions. It seems that from now on the story will be in moderm times. The three of them will have much to to rectify: Sesshoumaru, by allowing his pride to dictate his action until it was too late; Kagome, by allowing her selfshness to think of everybody else´s hapiness but hers and Inuyasha for persisting in something that clearly is an error. What a mess. This story is getting even better, and you are a very talented autor, writing a new chapter every week. You are spoiling me. Great work and until next time.
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