| "Temptation Waits" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: Neiome On: July 11, 2002 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man i think i am going to die from laughter hehe i think Lucas The Incredibly Good Looking Elf is the coolest this *sigh* i wish i had one and i never new vegeta was afraid of pink rats and street preachers but i mean who wouldn't??? YOU HAVE TO FINISH THE STORY!!!! |
Reviewed By: JOZIAHAS On: July 09, 2002 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! Write more as soon as possible please!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jesa Jaisai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 13:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to finish this fic! I think it's absolutely hilarious! Don't ever let anyone tell you that you aren't funny, because this fic rules! Anyway, keep up the good work!
I like how you're not jumping straight to the Lemon...it makes it better when you draw it out ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kui On: July 08, 2002 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love yer fic so far! also, i have just opened a dbz fic gallery, if you would care to submit this or any of your fics! you can see the site at http://kui.s5.com/home/, or email me at sailor_kui@yahoo.com. i accept any and all types and ratings! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay another good chapter love it |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 09:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story! haha. I can't wait for the new chapters. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: cherry On: July 07, 2002 03:30 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hi again!!!! Just to tell you, keep up the great work. Hope you can finish the next chapter soon!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is getting better love it |
Reviewed By: Amy135@home.com On: July 05, 2002 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wrrrrriiiiiiittttttttteeeeee Mooooooorrrrrreeeeeeeeee PPPPPPlllllllleeeeeaaaaassssssssssseeeeeee!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Amy On: July 03, 2002 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC IT'S GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!RIGHT MORE RIGHT AWAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 10:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Amy On: July 02, 2002 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That Chapter Was Awsome! Right more. The good thing about your story is i don't have to wait a few weeks for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 10:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the lemon I just wonder what is going to happen next when they wake up?? |
Reviewed By: cherry On: July 01, 2002 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god! I soo enjoy your fic. Its soo cool! Its rockin'! I also loved the idea of barney, its good that vegeta burned the tape>Die barney! Die! Oh sorry, got carried away!Newayz, great job!! |
Reviewed By: smitten_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 14:10 EDT
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i liked this chapter. can't wait for the lemon.
hey, but what happened to the elf? I liked the elf :-) |
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