| "Temptation Waits" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 12:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read the first few chapters, my god what are you on?, i couldn't stop laughing, you really have a knack for writing please do some more
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Reviewed By: carla121 On: October 24, 2004 11:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was the funniest fic! Oh my God! It was so creative, I've never read an idea quite like this. I almost split my sides laughing when Vegeta went into heat. The pick up lines were pure genius. I want a sequel! I want a sequel! Please write a sequel for me? PLEEEASE??
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Reviewed By: Furys Canticle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 20:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahahahaha. Great stuff. Vegeta was so lame in this fic but it made it fabulous. I love it. Really i can't stop laughing except to go awwww. This is my new favorite fic. Tehehehehe. Vegeta +Magic Mushrooms= laughter for the whole family. You have the highest of my praises.
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Reviewed By: saiyan_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 20:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good and funny fic! I loved it! I found Lucas funny but a little creepy, you know, I think i'd be a little freaked that I continually saw a good looking elf everywhere I went...hehehehe...but yea...I loved it!
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Reviewed By: bise B On: April 26, 2003 14:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! THAT WAS GREAT!! haha! i found lucas hilarious! that was so awsome! i loved every minute of it. i couldt stop reading it until i finished..haha. keep writing some more stories. i love B/V fics..i think they rock! but i like the ones where they get together. they are the best. so yea you did an awsome job writing this. keep up the great work! see ya |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 11, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious! PLease write more like that! |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 13:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great fic. I loved the ending, the song was perfect for it. The marriage ceremony was really neat too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dani Yuy On: December 30, 2002 00:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's me! thanks for the link to the finished story! By the way, I think that you should write a sequal, I don't have a clue how you could do it though! =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: September 20, 2002 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i suddenly have the strange urge to play that song as well... if only i weren't too lazy to change the cds... oh well. the ants were my favorite! my favorite forever! it's even my msn name! yeah, i'm wierd, but aren't we all? hopefully...
i loved your story! i've followed it since it's first chapter. i think. very cut e when they got married, too. the end was great, especially when tien said, "i thought i was your girl!" that was my favorite part.
good stuff indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: TrunksLuver4ever On: August 10, 2002 21:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ah man, this is the best fic I've read so far :D You HAVE to update soon... I can't wait to see what plan is running around inside Bulma's head... HEHE |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 11:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!
Vegeta: Save yourself. Run as far away from her as you possibly can.
ssjprincess: *smacks Vegeta on the arm* It's not that bad. *snickers* But yes, I'm back, finally.
What took so long was, *glares at Vegeta* my keyboard was totally ruined. I had to go and buy a brand new keyboard because, SOMEONE had to go and push buttons.
Vegeta: *crosses arms and smirks* She dosen't care, Woman. Get on with your Kami damned review, before you bore us to sleep with your incessant chatter.
ssjprincess: Oh yeah! The review, and the beginning of Saiyan Mating Season. :)
Vegeta: O.O! I forgot about that part.
ssjprincess: *chuckles* So on with the review....
Vegeta: O.o;;
ssjprincess: What?
Vegeta: *points to the fic* *I* do *NOT* give anyone a 'come hither' look! Maybe a 'come here so I can kill you' look, but a 'come hither' look? Never!
ssjprincess: O.o; Uhhhh...yeeaahh, what he just said. *mutters* Whatever that was?
Anyway, Barney and Friends?! The horror! The horror! That would be enough torture to bring even the strongest of men to their knees.
Vegeta: Your forgetting, I'm not some weak human. I'm a Saiyan. I can handle anything that is dished out. *croses arms with a smug look planted on his Princely features*
ssjprincess: *smirks* Is that so? Barney and Friends wouldn't bother you?
Vegeta: Of course not!
ssjprincess: Well then, how about this? *pulls out a Teletubbies DVD that miraculously popped out of no where* O.o *shakes head to clear it of the cobwebs*
Vegeta: Where did that come from?
ssjprincess: *shrugs* I have no idea, but I learned a long time ago not to ask questions, cause the answers are way too scary. But back to the point, *plops the DVD into the Television, which I might add also popped in from nowhere* Watch this, while I finish the review.
Vegeta: O.o I don't know what these Telewhatsits are?
ssjprincess: *chuckles* So much the better. *walks away to finish the review*
Anyhow, this story is hilarious! I love it! I'm just not sure why I'm just now coming across it? Oh well, I found it now, so good for me. :)
I loved when Vegeta was starting to crack from the incessant happy singing of that Kami forsaken Barney; and he encountered 'Lucas the Incredibly Good Looking Elf'! What a name! lol I can't wait for the next chapter, so I guess I'll get right to it! :)
*a loud blast is heard in the distance*
ssjprincess: What the-
Vegeta: *hair singed and smoking, eye twitching, as a half crazed look covers his face*
ssjprincess: Vegeta?
Vegeta: Don't worry, Woman. I destroyed the evil. *twitch twitch*
ssjprincess: O.o the evil?
Vegeta: Those evil Teletubbies! They were creating a plan to take over the world! The evil foul-mouthed Poe is their leader!
ssjprincess: O.o *nods slowly placating the near insane Prince* Whatever you say, Vegeta. I'm going to the next chapter now. Give Vegeta Goddess a *smirks* Teletubbie bye-bye.
Vegeta: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
Sorry, for my *long and pointless* review. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2002 11:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ssjprincess: *looks at Vegeta* I never knew that.
Vegeta: *looks curiously at ssjprincess* Knew what?
ssjprincess: That you liked to push buttons too. *smiles*
Vegeta: I like no such thing! *crosses his arms and scowls*
*suddenly a console appears with a large, shiny red button*
ssjprincess: O.o How?
Vegeta: How what, Onna? How are you such a moron? *smirks*
ssjprincess: *rolls her eyes at Vegeta*
Vegeta: *picks up ssjprincess' eyes and hands them back to her*
ssjprincess: *blushes* Sorry, I know that was stupid, but-
Vegeta: But look who did it. That explains why it was stupid. *chuckles* *suddenly stops chuckling as he notices the button* Oooooo....
ssjprincess: *smirking* I thought you didn't like buttons.
Vegeta: *inching his way towards the button, thinking he is being inconspicuious* I don't!
ssjprincess: Then why are you making your way closer to the button?
Vegeta: *standing next to the button now* What in Kami's name are you talking about, Onna? I think you are going crazy. Or should I say crazier?
ssjprincess: Ha. ha. *shakes her head at vegeta* Really though, I wouldn't push that button, Vegeta. You don't know what it will do.
Vegeta: *running his finger around the console* I have no intention to push that button. But you know, it is really shiny, isn't it?
ssjprincess: *runs towards Vegeta* No, don't push that button! You might blow us up or something!
Vegeta: *a crazy look comes to Vegeta's eyes* Pretty button. Must..... push..... pretty.... button....
ssjprincess: Nooooooo....
Vegeta: *pushes button and laughs insanely*
ssjprincess: O.o;; Now you did it!
*suddenly there is a loud poof*
BVegeta anmd ssjprinmcess: O.o
ssjprinmcess: NMow
look
what
you
did!
BVegeta: What|? What did it do?
ssjprimncess: Look it
totally screwed nmy
keybvoard up!
Ahhhh!! *nmarrows her
eyes at BVegeta* *BVANM!*
BVegeta: x.o Hey!
ssjprinmcess: *drops
the
fryinmg panm with a clang* O.O!!!
BVegeta: What?|
ssjprinmcess: *poinmts inm the directionm of where the conmsole onmce was* NMy keybvoard wasnm't the onmly thinmg that bvuttonm did!
BVegeta: *looks inm that directionm* Oh Kanmi!!
*Frieza is stanmdinmg there dressed inm a tight bvlack teddy*
ssjprinmcess anmd BVegeta: *look at each other*
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry that was so lonmg anmd poinmtless.
I just wanmted you to kmnow that I like how this fic has started out. :)
As soonm as I figure out what NMonmkey BVoy did to nmy keyvboard,
I'll bve
bvack. :) |
Reviewed By: bob On: July 19, 2002 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's great, i love! |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 18, 2002 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it! It's soooooooooo sweet how vegeta says home is where the heart is. Please update soon |
Reviewed By: Angelfire@home.com On: July 12, 2002 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great fic. But know i'll probably have nightmares from Vegeta haveing feelings for another guy and haveing Yamcha bio. All well right more please! |
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