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Reviewed By: Sara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 17:25 CDT
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About time! But it's as perfect as ever! Heero KNOWS ! didn't expected that! wow... He loves Duo so much! Hope Duo won't be hurt by this ba**** Milliardo! More !!!!
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Title: i hope this make sense *yawns, really sleepy*
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI!! I finally caught up, oh please this is a wonderful story and I can only plead that you not wait so long to update again I would love to see how everything turns out! I noticed in chapter 11 the following was said "Dorothy did not want to tell Duo that ever since the night she had read the cards, she had been certain that Milliardo was the one who..." From Chapter 4 it was Cathy who read the cards and but could she have told Dorthy about it? In the two latest chapters I saw less of him/her confusion but there was some switching in labeling duo as 'wife' at one point *its really late here and I don't remember where exactly* when everywhere else Duo was considered 'husband'... I'm sorry if I over step my boundaries, but it's not that I'm against Duo and Quat in dresses 'cuz their both quite beautiful, but i was just wondering why it was decided that they wear dresses for all formal occassions? Thank you so much for updating this fic, I would not have known about it and had a chance to enjoy it otherwise. Have a good week.
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Title: ch9
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Oh man FINALLY!!! a break, something that Duo has, proof, that Millardo isn't all he seems to be.
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Title: ch5
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 17:36 CDT
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I notice that often, when you speak of duo you interchange is gender between he and she... you do this more often with him\her... intentional? Is Duo a hermaphrodite?! that would be perfect knowing the meaning of the root words that make up this word. *hurries to next chapter*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 20:55 CDT
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*glomps S. Rose* I'm glad you twerked it!
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Title: ch.3
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 20:01 CDT
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*pouts* frilly dresses...*then smiles* they were beautiful dresses back then but man everyone is obessesed in putting Duo and Quat in dresses.
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Title: Ch2
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 19:07 CDT
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*squeals in utter delight* THANK YOU DOTTY!!! I'm so happy that Duo and Quat got rescued from Mueller!!
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Title: Ch! oops 1
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:41 CDT
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*priscel is estatic!!* I found a few typos... "Duo asked the question more to herself than to..." himself right, unless I read it wrong and 'Treize told Duo to follow hi, and ...' 'hi' should be 'him' right? *beams* Onward to more story!!
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Title: prologue
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN!! Where has this juicy tale of story been! I'm soooooo HAPPY you continued it and boy i can't wait to continue reading it! *glomps S.Rose and disappears with a whispery 'thank you'*
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Reviewed By: annonie On: September 04, 2004 16:44 CDT
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Your story is good but you seem to get the genders mixed up quite often. Duo seems to switch from a he to a she, and from being called a husband to a wife enough that it becomes a bit distracting to the story and leaves me wondering... you're not copying this from a book are you?
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Reviewed By: leemax^_^ On: September 04, 2004 14:12 CDT
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Man have I been waiting for this to continue for a very long time. I want to know more. I can't wait till the next part. Oh how I wish it will continue. More More More More More
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dilandaus lover On: June 22, 2004 09:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh the joys of just casually surfing the net for a ff worth reading. i came across this fic totally by accident, the other night, on a search for a load of fics to burn to disc to read in my spare time and today i came to reading yours. And blow me i couldn't stop reading it. I had to pause once simply because the need to eat was too great and even then i was straight back onto my laptop within a min >< I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you for such an excellent read. My only disappointment was when i came to the end of chapter 10 and realised there was no more to read. Distraught i think is the right word for it >
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Title: Can't wait for more!
Reviewed By: BitterSweetAsh On: April 21, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a lovely story. I read it a few months ago and I can't wait for a new chapter to come out. If you want help editing, I would be happy to beta for you. I'm a bit of a grammar geek and I'd love to help you so you can churn out another wonderful chapter!! ashley_kamine@hotmail.com
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