| "Picture" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yaoigoddess On: April 20, 2004 18:38 CDT
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God, you better damn well update soon! This story is amazing!
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Reviewed By: annonie On: April 19, 2004 04:11 CDT
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Though this is a story that rivals the paperback romances, I can't help but feel uncomfortable about Duo wearing a dress. Why did you do that? It detracts from your story instead of adding to it. He could have easily have been decked out beautifully as a man in Victorian era clothing, the dress part is just weird. As a man in a dress during that ear he would have been shunned if not stoned. And what was the thing about Heero seeing Duo with THEIR child on his lap? Please, you've stretched history about the marraige, are you going to have Duo pregnant too? That's a bit much. As long as you're making revisions, (and this is only my humble opinion) you should get rid of the dresses and don't do the male pregnancy thing. It will make your story more believable.
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Reviewed By: ens On: April 18, 2004 19:30 CDT
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I'm damn happy that you're back in the swing of things... I missed reading your story. I hope that you will update it soon and complete it... I'm dying to know how this things gonna end!
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Reviewed By: Enjen On: April 14, 2004 03:30 CDT
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i would've really liked it if you had continued this fic since you left such a cliffhanger. i really hope you do too, but it seems as if it's been awhile since you last updated. nevertheless, i continue to hope.
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Reviewed By: anne boleyn On: March 15, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this one please continue.I beg of you.pppppppppppppllllllllease
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Reviewed By: alithiela On: November 20, 2003 13:30 CST
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I guess you do not mean to continue, since you have not updated for seven months. Shame reall. This fic was one of the best i have ever read, if not THE best.
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Reviewed By: Vay On: November 07, 2003 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Are you going to continue this fic? Please?
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Title: Ohhh wonderful
Reviewed By: Ishtra On: November 05, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh I have fallen in love with this story, the torn Duo - can't say I haven't been in his shoes - though not in as extreme a case as this... Oh and I agree - how could you stop it here? Then again it is 12 midnight and I should be sleeping but nonetheless I love this story and am moved to comment. I hope to see more updating ^_^
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Reviewed By: Derstinys lot On: November 04, 2003 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. I'm truly enjoying it. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: AikoNamika On: October 16, 2003 01:17 CDT
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O.O You're stopping it right there? How could you just stop it right there?! It was getting really, really, interesting, and I go to click on the link for the next part once I finish the chapter, and THERE'S NOTHING THERE!!! ...WRITE MORE!!!! ...please?
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Reviewed By: Gemini Maxwell On: September 11, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice fic, only one thing is wrong. It's not FINISHED! ::aggrivated sigh:: and I was so enjoying myself! Come on! Update! Please? Pretty please? Pretty please with cherries and whipped cream and sprinkles and all other kinds of good stuff on top? |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 14:03 CDT
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What? WHAT?
You have it marked as completed... but where's the REST of it???
I enjoyed it so far, please continue! |
Reviewed By: kitte On: June 10, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
the style of this fic is great but you have a tendency to use different gender titles. Some of your spelling is weird because when you were typing this i think you hit the wrong key. I have not read a fic like this any where else, it is awesome. If you where to change the characters names, and make Duo a she instead of a he, i think you could publish this and make some money. well any ways i am looking forward to the next chapters. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's verry good. The main thing is the spelling. I was wondering if you were originally writing this for a girl and Heero, because I keep seeing her and she instead of him and he. It's really disturbing sometimes. X.x Anyway, it's really good, and I think I read this from somewhere else that it was archived at... a long time ago. Anyway update and tell me when you do!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Captain Retardo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 23:33 CDT
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Premise reminds me of the red violin |
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