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Reviewed By: Selevera On: April 12, 2003 21:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: NOOOOO!!!!!!! Please don't let Duo go through with it, don't let him betray Heero!!! You have *got* to write more!
I was sooo happy when I finally rechecked your page and found not one but two chapters! You're doing a wonderful job, and I am eagerly awaiting more!
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: April 11, 2003 20:23 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, you've got everything I like into this story! I absolutely love it! Please do continue this soon, it's hard going on without knowing what's going to happen! You have superb writing skills and a knack for detail [there are some mistakes with grammar, but I've looked far beyond that]. I really hope to read more chapters of this wonderful fic soon! |
Reviewed By: XplayinwitdeathX On: April 11, 2003 14:10 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn, suspense! Suspense! I'm itching to know what happens next. Please update again soon. It's really good. |
Reviewed By: 102000 On: April 11, 2003 13:10 CDT Comment/Review: Sorry. Meant Chapter 4 |
Reviewed By: 102000 On: April 11, 2003 13:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As for the review by Anonymous I think you didn't read Chapter 3 well enough because at the bottom it says and I quote "...yeah, yeah. I know. I tweaked with the timeline. I made homosexual marriages acceptable. In all times..." see It was explained at the baginning. And what are AU's for if not for changing the already existing things into whatever you want.
Write more please? soon! |
Reviewed By: XplayinwitdeathX On: April 08, 2003 16:53 CDT Comment/Review: Ok, wierd rating system but anyway, I really really liked your fanfic. You've got me all anxious to find out what happens next. Please write more and finish it soon!
-ENS |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 10:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh wow, I am totally enjoying this AU setting. I can't help but feel a bit sorry for Duo and the current situation he is in. That last chapter was a beat of a cliffhanger when Heero commented about Noin. *sighs dramatically* I can't wait to see this fic completed. Keep up the amazing work! |
Reviewed By: Rae On: March 17, 2003 18:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I NEED MORE!! This fic is awesome and I cannot wait for more. Please post soon ir else I will go mad!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Allylandra On: March 11, 2003 16:12 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: wonderful fic i must have more i will be bombarding you for as long as i have to pleaseeee! i will give you a cookie |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 10, 2003 20:23 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn, what a writer you are. Love the story. I do hope you continue to the end, it would be a shame not to. Ill look forward to updates |
Reviewed By: _shinchansgirl_ On: March 10, 2003 08:58 CST Comment/Review: PWEASSSEEEE UPDATE SOOOONN!!! I really like it so far, it'd be a shame if you didn't. You've done a really good job so far. |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori On: March 07, 2003 16:44 CST Comment/Review: No more? NO MORE???? **dies** this cannot be happening! **mutters darkly** **goes insane** **frets** **weeps**
Okay, i'm done ^^ |
Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: January 04, 2003 10:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Pleeeaaase,write more! This story is just so interesting. Go on! |
Reviewed By: MooMOoMilk On: January 05, 2003 19:06 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. I am so glad that you updated! I've been waiting for this chapter since last year! Heh, and I wasn't disappointed at all! The attraction between Heero and Duo is just sooooo adorable...I dread to think of what will happen when Heero finds out that Duo is deceiving him! And Duo, I wonder what he will do when he discovers that Milliardo is only using him for evil purposes! Who's right and who's wrong here? I really hope to find out...so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love your work!^_^!! |
Reviewed By: Too lazy to sign in On: January 02, 2003 12:41 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Brillieant, the plot is really interesting and the way you describe what is going on in such detail is amazing!
I reaal hope you can update real soon!!! |
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