| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... and to think that they were getting along fine... i guess the issue about them hasn't really been discussed... kinda sad that they are fighting... wonder what else will happen at the party... seems that they just went separate ways when they arrived at the party... inuyasha didn't even let kagome meet rin or sesshoumaru... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(smirk) Story's wonderifferous. So very interesting. What kills me is how Inuyasha and Kagome act, just like back in the day. Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great introduction to Rin. Seeing how devoted to Sesshomaru she is as a child I don't see her being different as an adult. I think it is hilarious that the "great Lord Sesshomaru" doesn't have a son. Jaken must be beside himself that he has to listen to a bunch of "worthless girls" instead of a male figure. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru has developed. I am also very curious as to Inuyasha's explanation that you have been hinting at. I am looking forward to the next installment with bated breath (so hurry up and get it out so I can breathe normally again) ;-D
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:18 CST
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Love the story!.....review soon!....or I will hunt you down with a frying pan!...........so we can talk about the story over sum eggs!..lol
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Reviewed By: Psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: February 03, 2008 03:04 CST
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Interesting, I like the Shippou moment in the kitchen... he's such a great character :) Frustrating part to stop off on right now, but I get the feeling there'll be a LOT of revelations to come?
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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IM STILL LOVIN THE STORY!!! ITS SO CUTE!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I WONDER HOW INUYASHA WILL BE DURING THE BIRTH??? LOL!!! SRRY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... really nice that inuyasha spent his day with kagome... it was a good thing for both of them... will be funny how inuyasha will cope with kagome's cravings... seems that kagome is concerned about having other people know she's pregnant and single... her friends can be nosy... will kagome run into hojo when inuyasha is around too... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: tsubaby On: February 01, 2008 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good this far... I really love it... Hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:16 CST
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memory must be unbelievable when one lives so long remembering details from 500 years ago, i can't even remember what i had for breakfast today. . . ha-ha-hee (or something like that) and blowing in and out real fast is the only breathing i can remember(then again the last time i needed that was over twenty years ago) one of them was to keep you from pushing until the doctor tells you that you're allowed to... i just screamed my head off and the doctor made fun of me (he was a friend of the family). . . you have brought back some interesting memories, i don't know if i should be glad or not. =P. . . i enjoyed that chapter, yash should learn a pregnancy massage or something (would show him to be thoughtful and caring) ~ a pleasure once again, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice bonding between the two. I liked how she got out of the baby shower. So when will Inuyasha propose to Kagome? I can't see her grandfather allowing them to continue together without saying something to Inuyasha about making an honest woman out of Kagome.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: January 31, 2008 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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:) Aww, that was really cute! Fairly short chapter, but fluffy and heart-warming.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 12:34 CST
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Great chapter! Look forward to the next one! I'm loving this story.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes it is a fantasy to say I'll take it to whatever no matter the price. I am glad that you had Inuyasha grow a bit, it helps show that he was young and a bit immature in the series but has developed since then.
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story....man its awsome.....i can't wait to see what happens next
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 05:51 CST
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Hmmm... I was just re-reading this, and I caught the cleaning lady bit. If he doesn't like everything, why DOES he keep her around??? I get the feeling that it may be a point of contention later...
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