| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: eriste [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 15:29 CDT
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OMG! I love this fic! You must update soon! I have to read more! Update soon, please please pleeeeeaaaaassssse!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: skath On: February 27, 2008 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i go away for what 2 weeks ish and u put up 5 more u rule. like i said best i ever read EVER. keep it up
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Bell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 21:56 CST
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damn this story is awsome i just read all 15 in one siting and all i have to say is... UPDATE! yep thats all besides that your story is wonderful.
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 16:36 CST
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Props for the awesome story! You pay such immaculate attention to detail that the story becomes more than a fanfiction. Also, the characters were well fleshed out, and the dates were always right or close enough. You are a great author and should continue to write often.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash, not logged in, grrr On: February 21, 2008 10:48 CST
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Wonderful ending, so glad they finally 'reunited'. I've thouroughly enjoyed this, start to finish, even when I wanted to beat our hanyou senseless. Great job.
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Reviewed By: megumi192 On: February 21, 2008 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe how cute is she and wow can't Inuyasha wait for a year at least!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2008 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... liked it very much... just love happy endings... good job... great work... keep it up... until next time...
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Title: the cute factor
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: February 20, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, its so cute going into labor during a fight, I guess the little one didn't like mommy and daddy fighting!
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Title: chapters 13 and 14
Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 20:20 CST
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Very good story you have here. Love the plot and where it´s leading. I had a fit of laught with the crazy thoughts of the three evil bitchs that Kagome insistes in calling friends...How twisted can this three be? And laught even more with the conversation between Kagome and Inuyasha after it. Very good. You are doing a great work here. I´m waiting for your next surprise. Congratulations
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter and a great introduction to the baby. I am glad that Sesshomaru showed a softer side and freed time up for Inuyasha to spend with his family. That little girl sounds like she is going to be so cute, and Inuyasha is going to be one very protective daddy, especially if a character like Miroku shows any interest. I look forward to the last chapter and any sequels that you do for this story. They promise to be good I am sure.
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 03:20 CST
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I am SOOOO happy with the way you portrayed the birth of the next generation of Inuyasha. It really came all together in the tale you were weaving to get to this point. It was very satisfying! And I love the banter and passion between Inu & Kags. Its relatable and amusing all at the same time.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 01:21 CST
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Hahaha, no keychain can save you now! No, really, that was an EXCELLENT wrap-up of that issue. Showed InuYasha's good-side without making it a "Days of our Lives" spin-off. Well done. :) The birth was very well written, too. Note: Nezumi actually means "rat", but close :) It's a fitting description for a maid ;) I'm glad I'm not the only picky reviewer out there... a lot of people beg for reviews, and my logic is "if it's good, you'll hear from me..." The only other time I review is if something is HORRIBLE, and I'll do that to point out why. But I'm kind of bluntly honest like that... I especially liked your characterization of Sango. Very appropriate :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 22:31 CST
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oh dear, the only thing you got wrong is that they wait until you are already having the uncontrollable urge to push and they make you wait even longer until they allow you to push. it feels like you are defecating a bowling ball and all your body wants to do is push it out, like uncontrollable spasms. "don't push yet, we have to strap your legs up in these restraining brackets... don't push yet the student nurse and the janitor haven't stuck their hands up there to see how dilated you are yet." . . aww, sweet baby girl! . . . a pet peeve, i personally nursed my babies everywhere, no matter who was around. when asked by a couple who had a baby around the same age if i wasn't embarrassed to nurse in public my reply, "why? aren't you embarrassed feeding your baby a bottle? this is natural and i know what i eat so i know what i'm giving my baby, not some soy/whey based synthetically fortified garbage." and i proceeded to finish walking around the zoo with my son at my breast. (radical activist here) ~ a pleasure, ginny *innocently kicks soapbox behind her*
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was amazing!!! That was as close to the real birting process as you can get it. *sigh* *sigh* I can't wait to have kids but that wont be for a while. Anyways I still LOVE your story please continue!!! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha cleared everything up with kagome first... really sweet... and now they have a baby girl... good thing kagome's mom and rin were there in the hospital... nice to see that seeshoumaru has changed... sad that it's gonna end... will there be a wedding... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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