| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 01:52 CST
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the cravings... i was doing something like chocolate chip cookies with tomato slices or peanut butter and pickle on rye toast, i still go for the peanut butter and pickle sandwiches. . . good story and you're right about the personifying of the fetus i think that fewer newborns would be discarded in dumpsters instead of hospitals or other safe places if their mothers thought of them that way. . . i like the interaction but they should communicate more, it's like they were at the beginning, at least they're opening up a bit. ~ a pleasure, thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2008 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome & inuyasha are getting to be more comfortable with each other... with shippou & itazura staying with them and in kagome's room and inuyasha suggest kagome stay in his room... maybe things will warm up between inuyasha & kagome... really nice of inuyasha to go with kagome to the doctor's appointment... how will inuyasha do in the lamaze class though... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: January 27, 2008 23:26 CST
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:) I'm really liking this fanfic! I'm really really picky, I usually only read Sueric stories, because the characterization in most of the others just bothers me. But I really like this, keep up the updates and the good work!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that kagome met shippou already... nice that shippou & itazura kept kagome company... cute that inuyasha took kagome shopping... he sure doesn't mind spending money... wonder what will happen at the party... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 20:43 CST
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nice update... glad that inuyasha & kagome are working things out... but there's still a lot of tension between them... they aren't acting like mates yet... so shippo comes in... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great follow up. I love how Inuyasha doesn't care about what it is or how much it is and Kagome flips about it. I hope they start working out their problems soon though, or at least before the baby arrives.
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Reviewed By: IXIWineIXI [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll b honest with u, forget ur other stories, this is by far ur best work
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Reviewed By: bbbeee On: January 26, 2008 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey,darn.you.left.another.question.open..I.bet.when.Rin.ended.the.sentence. she.wantes.to.say."that.whore"..poor.kag..no.wonder.inu.said.he.had.to.stra ight.things.out..he.is.such.an.idiot.to.believe.that.kag.did.not.want.to.co me.back..well,I.really.interested.how.the.situation.is.going.to.end. PS.:my.space.tab.is.broken.:P
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 07:24 CST
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Your story is awesome!!...you always end a chapter with a sort of cliffie that keeps me wondering...but that keeps me here as a reader....great job! And update soon please!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 01:32 CST
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dude the sexual tention is killing me!!and the worst part is they can hardly do anything b/c she's so far into the pregnancy. i can't wait to hear the stories im sure shippo has aboutinyasha from the last 500 yrs.update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 10:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am pleasantly surprised that Inuyasha learned patience in not jumping Kagome first without thinking about consequences. I will wait patiently (for a little while at least) for the two to get back together. I want to see what you are developing.
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 05:37 CST
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okay so u want to take the whole sex thing slow with them, but can they at least sleep in the same bed. it only seems normal w/her being pregnant and them still loveing each other deeply. update soon please ^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 02:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting that kagome moved in with inuyasha already... but since they are getting to know each other again and taking it slow it is a good start... wonder how long they both can resist each other... looking forward to the next chapter... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 17:19 CST
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Patience is a virtue. And the lemon is that much sweeter. Wait, wasn't that an oxymoron? Lemons/sweet... Eh, who cares, you know what I mean. I think IY is in for quite the ride, having moved K in. He's gonna be sorry a/b that 'take things slowly' statement. Baka hanyou, that's what you get! No worries, I'm loving this story, I'll stick around.
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Reviewed By: kschultea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 16:49 CST
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I'm really enjoying your story! Your writing style is very engaging and you do a great job of timing the ends of chapters! Also, great job on "He Touched Me"...fairly dark, but a great story with a nicely tied together ending. I look forward to the next update for this one!!!
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