| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It should help Inuyasha to get over the abandonment to realize he really wasn't abandoned. I think her mom should give him a good talking to get him realizing that he is doing what he thought she did to him, abandoning mate.
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 17:51 CST
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I think your story is pretty good so far?....about how long do you think this story will be?...I think it would be so cute when inuyasha shows kagome his true form...I wonder what is the first thing she will do...anyways..keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:26 CST
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Yes, our hanyou does indeed have 'foot in mouth' disease. You'd think, after some 500 years, and learning to run an international company...... I think, the problem I'm having with him, is that he was so bitter at Kikyou's betrayal, but when he heard that she hadn't, he immediatly forgave her, but when K explains, he brings up how he can't trust her. This time it's HIS betrayal of her (Kagome). Kagome could have died anytime in that six months alone without him, where if he had been looking for her (because surely he wouldn't forget where the well and her shrine were) he would have been there all along. Good for him she's not dead, I guess. Yeah, I'm glad to see him opening up to her, and I know there's gotta be some angst, but IMO, K let him off the hook waaaay too easy here. So, he's still not making me happy, but we'll see. Good characterization (even if I don't like his behavior) and pacing. Want to see how you turn this out.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... like it so far... glad that inuyasha contacted kagome and they talked more... hope they work things out and get back together... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... they finally meet again... and at least inuyasha knows that kagome is carrying his baby... but why wouldn't he trust her... she told him what happened... hopefully they get things settled before kagome gives birth... who will kagome see or meet next... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: JustcallmeSally On: January 21, 2008 13:59 CST
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MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORMEOREMORMEOREMOMROEMOREMORE...Im sure I messed up a bunch of those xD but oh well. Good story! Keep it up and keep the chapters comin!!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:18 CST
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Trust her? What the frack has she done that he shouldn't trust her? He's the one who put her in the past and didn't look for her. Even after her explaining, he still doesn't believe her? Smacks of the old IY and Kikyou situation, to me. One not trusting the other for false reasons. Interesting to see how you turn this out, but he's not doing to good with me right now. Baka hanyou.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 04:09 CST
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Hmmm, he's all but forgotten her, on the surface anyways. Will be interesting to see how they respond to each other, and why he came to the point he's at now.
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Reviewed By: badkittie2003 On: January 21, 2008 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What can I say, I love it. I really haven't read too many stories that start off with them being separated..... hmm, can't wait for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... so kagome's pregnant with inuyasha's baby and she still has her mating mark... and they meet again in the future... inuyasha is the one who saves kagome... hope they talk to each other when kagome regains conciousness in the hospital... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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