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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I was reading through once again this amazing story and I am wondering when you will be able to update it next. I love the characterization, and how the plot intersects so neatly with real life. Japan's government is to the best of my knowledge, expanding programs, cash payments to encourage the birth of more children. So nothing has happened that is quite as drastic as your story but it could. So I just wanted to let you know that there are still people who would love to see you update this story. Well thank you for posting what you have so far and I hope you are doing well. Sincerely, Zach
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished rereading this story. It is cute and interesting. A now overused topic, but you've twisted it a bit to suit the direction you want to head into. Political-social events of the soon to be Children of Men (minus the war) in the near future... I like it. I really hope you decide to continue this story sooner or later. Hope everything's going well with you. Ja mata~!
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Reviewed By: madjax36 On: November 07, 2008 14:21 CST
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So, here I am again reading your works and sighing in pleasure over your attention to detail, your cultural notes and the main plotline. I read and listened to similar newsbroadcasts regarding Japan's current projection of having a reversed population rate. The Japanese Government's solution (I heard) is to allow for a larger population of Chinese immigrants to have work visas and eventually apply for full status citizenship. It's also why Japan and China have been talking a lot lately. I do have a suggestion for your story (just a request regarding historical footnotes, really.) Could you maybe hint more about the violent racism in Japan, esp in Tokyo after WW II, where a large population of Chinese workers and their families protested with the new government, set up under MacArthur, that wanted to have established citizenship rights and equality and not be treated as monkeys/day larbors. I don't know if this information is at all usefull, but I figured since you have done such an excelent job describing how to move to Japan, that adding some historic depth could bode well in your storyline. Maybe not so harsh on the racism part, but when you watch old Yakuza films - kinda like watching old Samuri films - you get to see how the personalities develope and it adds another level of realism to your story. I say this, because the last one you completed "Gods Opinion" I thought was probably one of the best written modern day AUs in the Inuyasha Fanfic glore of stories. And your attention to detail, story layout, and transitions to other characters, I found myself whistful to read over other works. (And whistful that there aren't more authors who have a similar acquity for their writing styles as well.) The only problem I have, is my impatients in wanting to read your next installment of chapters. But, I think this story so far is fantastic and really would love to read to the very end. From your friendly neighborhood lurker, Madjax36
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Reviewed By: random_reviewer On: October 13, 2008 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is some really good penmanship right here. The plot and the character settings aren't your typical 'perfectly set up InuKag fanfic.' The descriptions aren't too long, which is great because I prefer to get on with the story. the chopsticks in the latest chapter were a great addition to show Kagome's personality.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 19:06 CDT
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Once again, you're accuracy of Japanese culture and romanization is really impressive. And I like how the relationships are developing so far, although I'd like to see a Inuyasha/Kikyou/Kagome date sometime soon. So yeah, keep up the good work!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Shiari_Sunshine On: August 30, 2008 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very great! You captured the Japanese culture in detail and made it easy for me ( who doesn't know but a few words and fewer Kanji) to understand! Who will Kagome be paired with, is this an inu/kik or inu/kag eventually??
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Reviewed By: Auds On: August 25, 2008 19:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! I really enjoy this story a lot but I think you meant "Utsukushii" "beautiful" when she received the present from InuYasha. Anyways keep on writing. I'll check regularly.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 18:38 CDT
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i read a wonderfully funny journal about cultural differences of u.s. / japan at gaijinSmash . net ♣ it is written by a tall black american who has been teaching english at elementary/junior/senior levels throughout japan relating his experiences with their cultural foibles and differences. many of the stories he relates are extremely hilarious. ♦ the cultural differences and your explanation of the japanese cel-phone obsession made me think of the above. ♠ quite an interesting and enlightening chapter, one wonders when kikyo or yasha will come to the conclusion that yasha just doesn't fit in with her lifestyle and image? ♥ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, well done! I really feel like the characters are in Japan when I read your story. The cell phone part was nice. I guess that's why they have all the cool cell phone charms and straps. I think you've done a good job capturing Kikyou's aloof nature also.
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Title: AlmaGemela
Reviewed By: AlmaGemela [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thrilled you updated! I can see why this lovely piece has been nominated: hope it wins!! I look forward to your next chapter...and the many more to come!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Princess Stormcloud0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love what you have written so far, but I do have a question. Who is Kagome supposed to be paired with? Does she even get a letter?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel kinda sad for kagome... so if sango was matched with miroku and inuyasha with kikyo... will kagome be matched with someone also?... wonder what sango needs help with... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 00:40 CDT
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Another great story...I know it will be. With Delayed Dawn and God's Opinion, they are wonderful...and I will know that this one will be just as good since it does have inuyasha and kagome romance in the future...^^
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(at Hell aka School) On: August 18, 2008 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter, glad to see you back! Is Kagome going to introdue Sango and Miroku to Inuyasha and Kikyou?
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 19:56 CDT
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An update! Very nice. Kagome is so cute! Interested for the action-y parts to begin. Thanks for posting and update when you can! :) ~Amber
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