| "The Principle of Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 06:54 CDT
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this sounds good, but why force marriage when all they want is babies? people have babies all the time without being married.
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! This looks like it will be a good one! :o) Great job! You've already got me hooked... I like this storyline. It's quite unique.
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 00:58 CDT
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Woah...all I have to say is AWESOME! You did it yet again, starting a completely alluring story that caught my interest in the beginning and now filled me with anxiousness for another chapter. I love the plot...very unique, government, and educational, but so cute...^^...I am forever a fan of your stories!
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now THIS is original! I like this so far and hope that you update soon. ^_^
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Title: adamilej
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo!!! I am so excited at this new story you've started to write. It seems like it is going to be another winner!!. I am so glad that you are writing a new story and I can't wait to read the next chapter. What an original idea as well. Thanks again, J
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Reviewed By: ehu On: March 11, 2008 21:44 CDT
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interesting concept. please continue! :)
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Title: ACK!
Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: March 11, 2008 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww...sh!t. You just had to do it didn't you. Thanks a lot for making me read another story of yours to be obsessed with Rosh, I really appreciate it... *lol j/k* I remember you saying you wanted to start on this one, and it looks like it's going to be just as amazing as TGO. Well...I'm buckled in and I have a bucket of popcorn so I'm good to go for the emotional rollercoaster this is sure to be. I can't wait to see how this is gonna turn out. :)
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Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:35 CDT
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This sounds like a very promising story! I know you will do good because I enjoyed your other stories so much!
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Title: Yeah!
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover829 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:33 CDT
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Yeah roshully, you're writing again! This chapter has alot of bait on it, and it sounds like it will be a good one. Yeah! For new story!
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 14:16 CDT
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Oh yes! A new story, everytime there is a new chapter I am on the edge of my seat trying to jump in the story.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting. Can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, however Austria (me living here all my life) doesn't have any Lords. (I just checked with my parents on that one) If there are any they are people from England that are here. GREAT story!!!!!!!!!!!!! We don't even get Knighted here any more, some law that they made up so now we only have the ones who got knighted prior to that law. (the fact is all they want to do is knight Cricketers (Game, not the bug, played in England, Australia, India...) and that isn't really worthy of "knighting." Maybe some thing else like an award or some thing... (saying that 'cause cricket fans like any kind of fan are crazy))
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... wonder how things will turn out... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Title: pewterwings
Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 22:33 CDT
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I like the beginning, but do you have a beta?
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Reviewed By: Kandylpn On: March 10, 2008 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a nice start to your fic, but I miss DD.
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