| "The Principle of Existence" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: Laurilane On: August 18, 2008 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to thank you, seeing that you had updated this fic made my day!!! I always look forward to it, thank you so much, cannot wait until the next one. The anticipation is killing me!
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Reviewed By: IRENE On: July 09, 2008 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a really interesting story and very fun to read. I think it helps that it's not a cliched plot but an original one. Keep up the good work. I am definitely bookmarking your story.
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Title: adamile
Reviewed By: dewrose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I am so glad to see another story from you. I love your writing. This is a great story. I wanted to ask you where you are going for your masters degree that required two languages? Thanks again for writing the story. J
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(N.S.I.) On: July 08, 2008 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy we got the know the characters a little better. You've hit Miroku's personality perfectly! He's hilarious, but has his sensitive and serious moments too. I'm also swooning over Inuyasha's vulnerability, it's lovely. Kikyou seems to be more worried about pleasing her family than falling in love. Will that be the monkey wrench?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 02:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... like it so far... feel a little bad for kagome though she has to deal with inuyasha's attitude... will kagome get her letter too?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: RinChan On: July 08, 2008 01:46 CDT
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You updated!!! Wonderful chapter ^_~ Can't wait for the next addition to your masterpiecve!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice chapter, Is Kikyou going to turn out to be a bitch when she finds out that InuYasha isn't totally human?
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 13:39 CDT
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I'm really intrigued by this story. I don't think I've ever encountered another plot line like this. I can't help but find myself hoping that something goes seriously wrong for the new "couple" so that kagome gets her chance for love! btw, congrats on the nomination for this story at the IYfanguild! (best AU/AR)
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Title: =]
Reviewed By: rinmaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your an amazing writer! I'm enjoying it emencely so far =]
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 04:45 CDT
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Boy, I do like it when authors recommend other stories to read...I always check them out, in case I'd like it as well...certainly glad I did! The premise is cool, the writing is *great*, and poor Kagome. I envision the poor dear is going to get sick over all the soaking she's gotten. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 17:44 CDT
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An interesting concept, I look forward to reading more of your story, and some of your other stories as I was linked to you by another author. Something to note (if I remember correctly) you can go directly from the Tokyo Narita airport to the metro and visa versa. It has been a few years since I was last in Narita airport other than for a transfer though, so I'm not 100% on that.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly loved TGO and this one, just from the two chaps Ive read, am hooked on! I love the premise of it. Should be very interesting as to what happens as the two begin to know one another. And then what of Kagome. Till next time, update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: Mio987 On: June 08, 2008 10:21 CDT
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mmm I really like this =D can't wait till we get further into the story... (and the cute KagomeInuyasha moments to come^^)
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 21:06 CDT
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OMG! I love this story...I bet it will be as good as The God's Opinion... ...Inuyasha and Kagome will be together right? It's their pairing together that I love. It's so sad though...how horrible Kagome is being treated, it's heart breaking to see her struggling in what she do...it makes me want to cry, so moving...I hope she gets what she deserve which is true love and a good happy life which will probably come later on in this story...Ack! I can't wait for the next chapter...Kagome will be sick from the rain and cold...
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2008 02:07 CDT
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i love the beginning of this story. the opportunities for plot lines are endless. the way you kept the basic ideals of the original story, and made them fit into this scenario was done so well. it all seems so natural, even for an unusual setting. this is such an original idea. thank you for all the time and effort that you put into this. all the hard work clearly shows through in this wonderful story.
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