| "Feel Like Makin' Love" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww but you cant really blame kagome...she didnt even know the well was sealed...please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kysha82 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't let it be to long before you write another chapter. Please and thank you.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awwww *gets all teary*
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 21:00 EDT
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*sniffles* if he would have only waited for her response after revealing that the well closed... ♠ they'll go get her and he will then grump at her, the never ending cycle. ♣ one feels sorry for the poor guy, he doesn't have to give up, he of all people knows how her mind works and he only has to keep trying. he knows she loves him. ♥ glad you're writing again! ♦ always a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 05:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great but sad update... to think that they finally meet but things didn't go well... hopefully when inuyasha cools down he'll go see kagome again since kagome doesn't know where he's gone... they need to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 03:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sits here shocked* HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US WITH THAT ENDING!!! im speechless... T-T
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 21:52 EDT
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and she was just crying her eyes out a minute ago... the wires just seem to get crossed all the time don't they? i would have assumed he would have stuck around to argue a bit more. she just got there, he should have realized he would have to overcome her reasons for leaving and the what she was feeling at the time... it's only been a few minutes for her, not long at all. . . maybe if he had on modern clothes he wouldn't have gotten such a cold reception and if shippo would have spoken to her first to prepare her a bit. and he should know her by now, she blows up then she gets over it, besides didn't he smell her tears? ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here Inuyasha is so looking forward to seeing Kagome and she yells at him. I thought it was great that she tried to sit him and it didn't work, those beads are nothing but trouble. Inuyasha will cheer up after Kagome apologizes for what happened and lets him know how happy she is to see him. It should be interesting to see Inuyasha shopping for modern clothes.
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Reviewed By: LatinaJE On: May 27, 2008 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue with the story i wanna know what happens
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Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 18:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. It was very interesting. I was wondering when you were going to write again.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The scenes with the children were cute, especially when Shippo was correcting his kids. I thought the panic that Tatsuya felt was very true to life too; all of a sudden he realizes that "the" event that his family had been waiting for and anticipating for 500 years has come to pass and now he has nothing else to do. I am a little surprised that there weren't other, older family members there to witness the event. Tatsuya might be the only one around that chose to be a shrine keeper but there should have been others who made other choices. At least the older members of the family, like Kagome's grandfather, who love to sprout history to the younger generations. I was a little surprised by Sesshomaru's attitude, but I think he might have still been a little upset with the decision made by his brother to just hibernate for 500 years. At least he brought his son to meet his uncle at the awakening. I loved Inuyasha's impatience at getting to Kagome, he has never really showed any patience before so getting any now would be too much of a shock. I also liked the ending scene with Kagome showing that it hadn't been her decision to seal the well and that she did intend to return to Inuyasha. I hope that she reacts well when he shows up on her doorstep and they work out their differences. It should help when she realizes what he did for her if she doesn't become too angry with him for abandoning their friends. I am anxiously awaiting the meeting.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... finally inuyasha is awake and in kagome's time... glad that shippou is there to help him... too bad sesshoumaru's attitude didn't change... seems that the time inuyasha woke up is the same time kagome left the feudal era... can't wait until they all meet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rubs palms in anticipation* Oooo...it's just getting to the GOOD part. I mean, it's already been good up to this point, but now...(as they say) "The moment you've all been waiting for!" Can't wait, can't wait!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 15:48 EDT
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L-O-V-E IT
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 14:43 EDT
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so he's still the simple, gruff, penniless idiot she fell in love with... just full youkai. is he going to have anything to offer her besides his body or has shippo made provision for that? he could have learned a whole lot from kagome's history books and stories of her time to take financial advantage and since they saved and took care of him would he have considered yash and kagome his responsibility? sorry if i didn't comment last chapter... stuff happens. ~ delighted as always, ginny
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