| "Something Happens..." Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: moni On: November 30, 2008 13:57 CST
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Cant wait to see what happens next...!!
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Reviewed By: Pariah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 05:37 CST
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I always enjoy your writing. Nice pacing, nice sense of the characters. Looking forward to reading more. :)
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 04:44 CST
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wow... I'm pretty sure i just cried through all of chapter four... damn and my make-up looked so good too...
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Title: Ch 8
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2008 04:34 CST
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Hi, I couldn't remember this story by the title, so I went back a chapter or so and reread a bit. Anyway, it was good. I thought the reunion was fine. Can't wait for the next chapter (well, ok, I will if I have to). Thanks! Ja!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I can't WAIT until Inuyasha and Kagome meet face to face again. I look forward to it!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... things are getting interesting... seems that ayame has feelings for kouga... and kagome still loves inuyasha but is engaged to kouga... what will happen when inuyasha and kagome meet again... what will kagome do now that she knows... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see you back! Great chapter...Very touching and so well written! I also thought the phone mixup was a great touch. Inuyasha and Koga meet in passing not realizing what is in their future...lol. I liked Inu's shout out to his daughter the best, tho. Kagome for an instant had to be thinking he was talking to her. They both have so much heartache. Can't wait to read what happens next when they finally see each other again!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 15:12 CDT
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quite an emotional chapter. ♣ the phone mix up was great! wanna love the attitude, thinking kouga was forbidding her from camp... and the zoo. lol ♥ a delight ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! This part of the movie was my favorite and you wrote it perfectly. Glad to see you're back! Till next update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 {not signed in} On: April 27, 2008 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. but i think i've said that enough times for you to realize i mean it =]] keep writing, and keep those updates coming as fast as you possibly can! THANK YOU! =D
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Reviewed By: angelblaze2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 00:04 CDT
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Wow, I'm quite surprised that Kikyo had her and Inu's daughter take on quite the task. But then again it seems she has the guts to take it one! Keep on going!!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Little Kagome is going to have her work cut out for her! Not only is there going to be trust issues between Kags and Inu, I'll bet she'll feel some obligation to Kouga and that he is the safer choice since he seems to loves her. Kags won't feel like second choice with Kouga. Also, even if little Kagome gets Kags 'on board' Inuyasha is still grieving for Kikyo and seems would be a difficult path to get him to realize a romantic love for Kags. No matter what...some interesting things to come!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Should be fun when Inu finds out what his daughter, and her co-conspirators, have been up to, hehe. And funny on how the 'fates' aren't on Koga's side. Lol. While I do like your story, might I suggest maybe getting a beta for it. One could help pick out any errors you overlook when writing. Please don't take it as a flame, is just a suggestion. I think the story is a good one. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad that Kagome has had a successful life, even though she was without Inuyasha. But, just like him, it seems that she's felt empty. Kouga seems like a good guy, if more than a bit domineering. But, Kagome is clearly just settling for him. And now that little Kagome will finally get to meet her dad's best friend at the camp, let the game begin. Great story.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 04:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome higurashi has entered the scene... seems that little kagome has some divine interventions on her side... glad that sango helped... wonder what the reactions will be when they meet... update when you can... please and thank you...
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